The Real LJ Idol * Season 11 * Week 13: Fan Death

Feb 10, 2020 17:35

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nikkiii_brown February 12 2020, 14:46:35 UTC
Absolutely lovely! ♥

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rayaso February 13 2020, 00:47:55 UTC
Very impressive -- you packed so much into a few words.

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suesniffsglue February 13 2020, 03:02:50 UTC
Oh, oh, oh.... this. This is so gorgeous and it is so raw and so true. How deeply personal and lovely ❤

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halfshellvenus February 13 2020, 21:35:42 UTC
voice chopped
into stops
and starts.
I know this effect, and the image is so vivid.

There is a little bit of that sense of "How dare you complain about your lot in life" to that Korean superstition, isn't there?

Loved the last stanza, and the free-falling that is (by construct) doing what it says.

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alycewilson February 13 2020, 22:59:41 UTC
Loved this contrast of worlds.

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