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cindergal November 11 2012, 23:20:21 UTC
Great story! I really enjoyed it all the way through.

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marsabi November 12 2012, 18:05:57 UTC
Thanks for reading! I'm so happy you thought it turned out well!

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marsabi November 12 2012, 18:04:54 UTC
Oh Lemondrop....truly this comment meant the world to me! My goal was to handle it all with "grace" and I'm so happy you felt that!

Thank you!

I wasn't sure people would be here reading and commenting--And your comments rocked!

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tldreamer November 14 2012, 00:38:17 UTC
What a wonderful story! Thank you. I don't know what else I can say that hasn't already been commented on before, but I loved this very much.

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marsabi November 14 2012, 03:15:46 UTC
Aww, thanks very much! Just getting some comments all the way through is so awesome! Your feedback has made me very happy!

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ltklo November 16 2012, 12:56:24 UTC
Thanks. That was enjoyable.

I loved reading how they found their way back to each other. You wrote that beautifully.

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marsabi November 16 2012, 16:22:14 UTC
Thanks so much!

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writergirl2006 November 21 2012, 01:44:55 UTC
I don't think I can express just how much I enjoyed getting to see this story develop from the beginning. It's such a wonderful tale and you did a terrific job with the subject matter. Brava!! *throws flowers* Definitely a story I'll go back and reread often! :)

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marsabi November 22 2012, 12:44:00 UTC
Thanks so much! I am glad that you enjoyed it, and that I did not drive you too nuts. Your help got me past so many sticking places. I can't thank you enough!

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writergirl2006 November 22 2012, 13:01:31 UTC
Oops--I left this comment in the wrong place, so I'm giving it another try.

You didn't drive me nuts! If there's one thing I understand, it's wanting your story to be the absolute best it can be!! :)

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