Dumb, Hyper, and Really, Really Horny

Jul 01, 2010 02:05

Story Or Series Title: Eye Candy

Fandom: Death Note

Culprit Author's Name: xXGoody No-So-Great MeXx

Full Name (plus titles if any): Amethystte (and also Olivia)

Full Species(es): Human?

Hair Color (include adjectives): "my shoulder-length chocolate and purple streaked hair falling around me" and "I had curled my hair in sexy big curves"

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ladyassassin27 July 1 2010, 09:14:05 UTC
While I like the idea of a sue who can spontaneously cause threesomes to happen around her, because it will be utterly hilarious! This fic scares the fucking daylights out of me /hides under the bed.

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aniquick July 1 2010, 16:19:50 UTC
Yeah, if it had omitted the gross older guys and the incest and the creepy dead-parent-hatred, or if it had kept those things but they had been played for laughs, it actually could have been decent enough to escape sporking (I mean, the author can spell and everything!).

So close and yet so, so very far.

It scares me too.

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muffinbite July 1 2010, 09:32:32 UTC
Lawli-kun
Lawli-kun o.O *twitches* Oh dear I feel sorry for you having to spork this, even the little I read has just about made my brain explode.

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lian_hua July 1 2010, 12:45:02 UTC
I can't stop shuddering.

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waters_of_lethe July 1 2010, 14:02:17 UTC
Good god I feel sick o_o

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alchemistpotion July 1 2010, 14:24:22 UTC
How does one pronounce that, Amethystte. Is there some relation to the word amethyst?

his sugary brown eyes looked back into my slightly darker, deep coffee eyes.

This is epic-ly stupid!

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aniquick July 1 2010, 16:29:51 UTC
I assume it's related to the word amethyst, perhaps a reference to the purple streaks in her hair? I think "Amethystte" could use another vowel, though. That long string of unbroken consonants looks intimidating.

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alchemistpotion July 3 2010, 05:52:36 UTC
Amethystette perhaps is what they were going for?

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aniquick July 3 2010, 16:55:19 UTC
That would make a lot more sense.

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