us college kids (1/1)

Jan 06, 2009 20:44

us college kids (college au, r) by holdmetightx
yunho/changmin (junsu/hyukjae), 6,981 words.
i’m back with more fail, just bear in mind that i nearly completely deleted this halfway through writing it. also, thank you for the amazing response on my jaechun fic (‘:
warnings: sex, more fail yoochun and general ridiculousness like everything i write.

’Thought you said you loved a challenge.’ Changmin snorts from the other side of the table and Jaejoong fixes his glare on him instead.

‘I said I loved a challenge, not that I loved the challenged.’
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fandom: dong bang shin ki, pairing: yunho/changmin, verse: college, !one-shot

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holdmetightx January 6 2009, 21:38:02 UTC
lmao ihu.

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anglosaxons January 6 2009, 20:56:27 UTC
SPOTSPOTSPOT SOPMSFNFSN BRB DYING/READING

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“Bonjour!” He says in possibly the worst French accent Changmin has ever heard, “sap sari wah yoh!”
“Okay, that’s enough beer for you tonight, Chun.” Jaejoong says, pulling away the glass and patting Yoochun’s head.

“Sap sari wah yoh!” Yoochun repeats, flinging a hand out and spilling Jaejoong’s drink everywhere.

“What does that even mean?” Jaejoong fixes him with a glare and Yoochun doesn’t answer, just pulls a face and makes grabby hands at his beer. Jaejoong sighs.

“Thought you said you loved a challenge.” Changmin snorts from the other side of the table and Jaejoong fixes his glare on him instead.

“I said I loved a challenge, not that I loved the challenged. “
LOLING FOREVER ASDGPIONSFSFN LMFAO, I LOVE YOU.

I could probably quote this entire fic but I am super incoherent asdpomnsdgn

Also, this is perfect:
Yoochun laughs for a good half hour when it takes Changmin 10 minutes to find a comfortable position to sit in, in Music Theory the next morning.Your Changmin is wonderful ( ... )

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holdmetightx January 6 2009, 21:42:22 UTC
dajhesuihjasiojeas (':

THANK YOU. now hopefully i wont have to slave over fic for another month.

AND I COMPLETELY FORGOT: sap sari wah yoh!

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anglosaxons January 6 2009, 22:03:00 UTC


hopefully, lmao. i'm going to be slaving over fic when i get home later, though sbinsffhs jaechun whyyy ;_;

LMAO, sap sari wah yoh~!

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candielover93 January 6 2009, 21:16:35 UTC
hiii natashaa :DD

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candielover93 January 6 2009, 21:37:53 UTC
reveal Yoochun posed in the middle of the stage - Yunho?

A;SLDKJFA;SLDKFAD IHU. WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD, HM? >:| i don't even know how many times i cracked up while reading this, i swear. starting from jaejoong to the pink wonder girls poster, to bambi, to just EVERYTHING. just like your other fic, i LOOOOVE all of your characterizations. and ohgod, yoochun's fail rofll. and the junsu/hyukjae fights, dyiiing. :( your random additions of suju makes me love this even more, if that's even possible. jaejoong's such a horrible best friend, looll, but that's what i like about him in this 8D and and and the part about changmin praying/pleading for yunho to come with him to the bar? A;DLKFAJD;SLF. but again, why not enough fail!yunho :( that's just me though, lol, and my bias showing. but everything else was a;sldkadfamazing.

i'm memming this again >:|

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holdmetightx January 6 2009, 21:44:44 UTC
their names are too alike, fixed (:

lmaodasjeas. i swear i tried to include more fail!yunho, one day i'll write a yunho-centric fic JUST FOR YOU lmao. thank you so much :DDDD

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candielover93 January 6 2009, 23:46:37 UTC
eek, yay! :D ♥

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suna_sprite January 6 2009, 21:48:12 UTC
OMG. I LOVE IT.

That's was HILARIOUS and HOT. XDDDDD I love all the humorous dialogue ^_____^ This had me "aw"ing and "LOL"ing all over the place. Oh and the Homin helped a lot too <333 *gives you cookies*

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holdmetightx January 6 2009, 21:55:35 UTC
heheeee, thank you love (:

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holdmetightx January 6 2009, 22:02:48 UTC
one day i'm going to kill you.

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angel_9_lives January 6 2009, 22:12:12 UTC
ahh, it looks like everyone else already caught the mistakes~

oh well, lol. I really liked this^_^ def. bookmarking it, lol.

btw...."sap sari wah yoh!" um..what is it SUPPOSED to be? o.O

~Angel

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holdmetightx January 7 2009, 07:49:04 UTC
haha, yes. thank you :D

uhm, it's in the DBSK bonjour paris dvd and they just keep saying it. idek know what it means, it just amused me.

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