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Jun 07, 2004 00:52

People were sad. They formed a village and called it Happy Happy. Everything was painted blue: the houses, the cows, their clothes dyed blue. All was sweetness and lights until he saw a vision of children, dancing outside a chimney, rain beneath a silk curtain. From that point on Mr. Carpainter was a saint, a prophet, a messenger of God. His ( Read more... )

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*shun* warrior__poet June 8 2004, 20:12:35 UTC
I was more interested in why I was removed than why I was added. I feel shunned.

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absolutleybill June 8 2004, 20:40:38 UTC
So...apparently, mysterious person, you add people randomly and don't tell them why. I am enthused by your methods and, despite my cynicism, not in the last bit worried.

However, I'd still like to plead for you to indulge my curiosity...we'll see where that goes.

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molkovia04 June 10 2004, 10:43:07 UTC
It's great it's like some kind of on-line big brother thing
...randomly add a bunch of complete strangers and see how they take it...certainly seems to cause some debate as this lengthy list of replys has proven!

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waffle_party June 8 2004, 20:45:12 UTC
There's no doubt that you're talented writer, but at the same time it's difficult for readers to enjoy writing that is so vague and confusing. There are so many metaphors congested into a simple paragraph that few will take the time to disect it and absorb that meaning behind it.

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Ha! Ok. eventualdave June 8 2004, 22:39:13 UTC
Instead of bitching about people I don't know adding me, I'll enjoy this bit of randomness, and add you RIGHT THE HELL BACK. So THERE.

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surfincolorado June 8 2004, 22:41:09 UTC
Who are you?

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