"Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 1a/?
anonymous
September 9 2012, 05:18:17 UTC
To the OP who requested this, it's the same A!A who responded to you last time! Sorry it took me so long, but here it is, at least the first part! I hope you enjoy!
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For all the things that he'd been through, all the situations the he, personally, had to un-fuck, John never expected any of this.
Commander John Shepard was unique, a rare breed of soldier. He belonged to no specific world, born in the vast expanse of space, delivered on Arcturus Station. He was a military brat, born to Hannah and Alan Shepard, practically wearing the Alliance blues as he left his mother's womb.
Commander Shepard was, in few word, a hero. A true hero. His actions as both a leader and a soldier cemented this reputation.
He was the "Lion of Elysium" to the citizens of the highly populated, Alliance colony.
A protector to the people of Eden Prime.
A liberator to the colony of Zhu's Hope.
A savior to the Rachni species.
And the spectre who saved the Citadel to the rest of galaxy.
He was humanity's golden boy, the shining example of what all
( ... )
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 1d/?
anonymous
September 9 2012, 05:23:57 UTC
Jack pulled her fingers from John's mouth, spreading her cheeks as she bent over the crate once more. She ground her ass into his cock, drawing a low moan from the Commander.
"Now fuck me in the ass, boy scout!"
John didn't need to be told twice. He pushed, slowly at first, and his member's swollen head worked its way in. Jack was cursing loudly, slamming her fist on the side of the crate as John pushed deeper, but the noise was drowned out by the hum of the engines.
John continued to push into Jack's ass, slowly but surely, breaking the resistance inch by inch. Soon, he was completely inside her, with his hips flush against her own.
It wasn't like her cunt, not as wet, but it was definitely hotter and maddeningly tight.
"Fuck!" Jack whimpered, her voice cracking a bit. She thrust her hips back against John's, urging him to get to work. John obliged, pulling out a bit before thrusting back in
( ... )
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 1d/?
anonymous
September 28 2012, 03:48:50 UTC
Op here.
I dont wish to be a nuisance or to cause unwanted pressure to the wonderful and talented author, but i really much ask, for the same of my own sanity, if you plan on finishing this?
A!A here
anonymous
September 28 2012, 04:08:10 UTC
Don't you worry your pretty little head, OP. I haven't forgotten you! I've just been a tad bit busy with my personal life! The next chapter should be up in a few days, I assure you!
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2a/?
anonymous
October 8 2012, 05:06:32 UTC
First off, I'd like to apologize for keeping you waiting for so long! I'm veeeery sorry! Things have been busy for me and very, very annoying! Life's kind of funny that way!
I hope this update is to your enjoyment OP!
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One week.
It had been one week since Shepard's... encounter with Jack
( ... )
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2b/?
anonymous
October 8 2012, 05:10:04 UTC
As much as it pained him to do so, John couldn't tell Tali. What happened with Jack was simply not something his angel needed to know. The most John could do was to treat Tali like a queen and hope that he might one day deserve her
( ... )
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2c/?
anonymous
October 8 2012, 05:10:37 UTC
"I know how much you care for me. The feeling is very, very mutual, I assure you..."
Tali was practically pressed up against Shepard now, her hands entwined with his.
"...But we can't have any distractions right now. The mission is too important for you to be worrying about me all the time."
John's spirits were crushed. Every time they got too close, either John or Tali would do or say something that made them back-pedal out. Maybe they were afraid of the consequences of such a coupling or maybe it was some other reason.
See? You're not together! She even said it herself! Stop feeling guilty!
John frowned once more as he met Tali's eyes with his own. He nodded slowly.
"Yeah... I understand..." John sounded dejected, a defeated tone filling his voice. Tali didn't look much better, her shoulders drooping and her head hung low as she tried to avoid eye contact with the human in front of her.
It doesn't matter if it's not official! You know how she feels about you! She said it herself just moments ago
( ... )
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For all the things that he'd been through, all the situations the he, personally, had to un-fuck, John never expected any of this.
Commander John Shepard was unique, a rare breed of soldier. He belonged to no specific world, born in the vast expanse of space, delivered on Arcturus Station. He was a military brat, born to Hannah and Alan Shepard, practically wearing the Alliance blues as he left his mother's womb.
Commander Shepard was, in few word, a hero. A true hero. His actions as both a leader and a soldier cemented this reputation.
He was the "Lion of Elysium" to the citizens of the highly populated, Alliance colony.
A protector to the people of Eden Prime.
A liberator to the colony of Zhu's Hope.
A savior to the Rachni species.
And the spectre who saved the Citadel to the rest of galaxy.
He was humanity's golden boy, the shining example of what all ( ... )
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"Now fuck me in the ass, boy scout!"
John didn't need to be told twice. He pushed, slowly at first, and his member's swollen head worked its way in. Jack was cursing loudly, slamming her fist on the side of the crate as John pushed deeper, but the noise was drowned out by the hum of the engines.
John continued to push into Jack's ass, slowly but surely, breaking the resistance inch by inch. Soon, he was completely inside her, with his hips flush against her own.
It wasn't like her cunt, not as wet, but it was definitely hotter and maddeningly tight.
"Fuck!" Jack whimpered, her voice cracking a bit. She thrust her hips back against John's, urging him to get to work. John obliged, pulling out a bit before thrusting back in ( ... )
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Oh.
My.
God.
I honestly never thought id see this day.
Thank you so much Author, I cant wait to see the rest.
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Moar please.
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Seriously, you have got to finish this. It's amazing.
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I dont wish to be a nuisance or to cause unwanted pressure to the wonderful and talented author, but i really much ask, for the same of my own sanity, if you plan on finishing this?
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It's also nice to know my work is appreciated!
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I hate to add pressure, especially knowing that real life often times gets in the way.
I absolutely can not wait to see the rest, and i thank you for the hard work and brilliant writing.
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I hope this update is to your enjoyment OP!
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One week.
It had been one week since Shepard's... encounter with Jack ( ... )
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"I know how much you care for me. The feeling is very, very mutual, I assure you..."
Tali was practically pressed up against Shepard now, her hands entwined with his.
"...But we can't have any distractions right now. The mission is too important for you to be worrying about me all the time."
John's spirits were crushed. Every time they got too close, either John or Tali would do or say something that made them back-pedal out. Maybe they were afraid of the consequences of such a coupling or maybe it was some other reason.
See? You're not together! She even said it herself! Stop feeling guilty!
John frowned once more as he met Tali's eyes with his own. He nodded slowly.
"Yeah... I understand..." John sounded dejected, a defeated tone filling his voice. Tali didn't look much better, her shoulders drooping and her head hung low as she tried to avoid eye contact with the human in front of her.
It doesn't matter if it's not official! You know how she feels about you! She said it herself just moments ago ( ... )
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