Garrus/FemShep - C-Sec officer/ex-sex slave
anonymous
January 10 2013, 14:15:59 UTC
During the raid on Mindoir, Shepard gets taken with the rest of the humans. Batarians divide them in two groups - those who’d stay in their space and those who’d get trained and sold to someone in the rest of the galaxy. Shepard’s in the second
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When The Lines Get Blurry 2c
anonymous
January 14 2013, 23:37:49 UTC
The shot resounded through the room. The krogan stumbled backwards with a cry of pain, as he cast the girl aside. Delanus advanced, his own weapon ready. The krogan charged forward with a cry of rage. Then two officers jumped out of the way so the Krogan stumbled past them and open fired
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Re: When The Lines Get Blurry 2c
anonymous
January 15 2013, 04:10:16 UTC
This has been coming out really damn well so far. I'm glad she's out of immediate danger finally but there's so much more she's going to be going through... Good luck hon. And good luck to Garrus tooo, because I think he's gonna have a hard time understanding how she doesn't just... fix when she's free. He's young and optimistic, and the shit that happened to her is old and deeply seated.
On a lighter note, Garrus' partner is a pretty cool guy ^^
Re: When The Lines Get Blurry 2c
anonymous
January 15 2013, 09:34:31 UTC
OP: I'm in love with this story. I think you're writing C-Sec Garrus very well - his stubbornness and how he feels like he had failed because he didn't save her, it's very in character. Everything about Shepard feels very thought-out. She would've been a strong person already when she got taken and the memory of the asari showed how much was needed to break her. I really can't wait to see what happens next!
When The Lines Get Blurry 3b
anonymous
January 17 2013, 02:05:34 UTC
She didn't understand what they were planning to do until the nurse reappeared with the mask. She stiffened, her breath quickening. The nurse noticed her fear, "don't worry hon, it'll be over quick
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When The Lines Get Blurry 3d
anonymous
January 17 2013, 02:10:01 UTC
Annika hesitated. They wanted to gas her. She looked at the surgical equipment already wheeled into the room. "Awake when they put it in." She avoided using the personal pronoun, it felt wrong on her tongue. She remembered the more painful things, even long ago things, and the implant had been among the worst
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Re: When The Lines Get Blurry 3d
anonymous
January 17 2013, 05:27:00 UTC
Goddamn this is really touching, it tugs at the heart in painful little ways. Oh Shepard, honey, it'll take time- maybe years- but slowly it'll get better I promise.
Garrus, you are just a wonderful man, bless you. I love this fill.
And if there were tense issues they weren't bad enough for me to pick up on them while reading ^^
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On a lighter note, Garrus' partner is a pretty cool guy ^^
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It's just perfect!
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Garrus, you are just a wonderful man, bless you. I love this fill.
And if there were tense issues they weren't bad enough for me to pick up on them while reading ^^
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