Mass Effect Kink Meme: PART XVIII

Jun 24, 2013 13:42

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Fill: Target acquired: Garrus anonymous August 12 2013, 20:13:32 UTC
The Sad Man Behind Blue Eyes 1/4 anonymous August 12 2013, 20:15:09 UTC
The walk from the incident site to the safe-house was a leisurely but long three hour stroll. He could've been there significantly sooner if he'd wanted to take the elevators or a gravcar, but Garrus was using every bit of his knowledge of C-Sec monitoring to evade detection. A walk was safest. A deceptive no-hurry amble that wouldn't raise questions or draw attention even if he was spotted. Just another turian, albeit an armed one, yet clearly not Archangel reborn.

But he'd still felt too exposed, too vulnerable during the walk, like an awareness of a bullseye having been painted on his back. And now the discovery he'd made upon reaching his safe-house. The lock had been tampered with. It was a subtle job. He doubted he would've found it if he hadn't been paranoid lately and looked for it specifically before entering the apartment.

Being a fugitive on the run had a way of making you develop healthy paranoia.

So he had guests.

...or a guest. Shepard would've heard about his... situation by now. And a C-Sec team would've just ( ... )

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The Sad Man Behind Blue Eyes 2/4 anonymous August 12 2013, 20:16:09 UTC
What he didn't say was, 'So you could've postponed your assassination', but Garrus heard it anyway ( ... )

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The Sad Man Behind Blue Eyes 3/4 anonymous August 12 2013, 20:16:51 UTC
"What if I promise to stop? I'll drop off the ladar completely, go into hiding, never hurt a fly again. Maybe open a soup kitchen somewhere ( ... )

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The Sad Man Behind Blue Eyes 4/4 anonymous August 12 2013, 20:17:54 UTC
Kaidan released the pressure on his spurs, but didn't budge otherwise, leaning over him, dripping blood but looking far too calm. "I'm not here to kill you. I will if you leave me no choice, but please, Garrus. Don't make me do that. You didn't fire on me back during the blow-up with Udina. Let me return the favour ( ... )

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Re: The Sad Man Behind Blue Eyes 4/4 anonymous August 12 2013, 21:59:56 UTC
Nope. I'm not crying, I'm trying to drown the bug that flew in there.
Wonderful piece A!A.

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Re: The Sad Man Behind Blue Eyes 4/4 anonymous August 13 2013, 00:11:22 UTC
Damn, A!A. That broke my heart. You really nailed both Kaidan and Garrus's voices in this.

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Re: The Sad Man Behind Blue Eyes 4/4 anonymous August 13 2013, 06:59:07 UTC
I don't know how to feel. 1) Very good writing. Garrus and Kaidan were in character, and everything flowed well. Nice ending too. 2) I fucking love Garrus, and his arrest makes me irrationally angry at Kaidan who was just doing his job :C

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Re: The Sad Man Behind Blue Eyes 4/4 anonymous August 13 2013, 09:15:25 UTC
Friggen fantastic a!a, well done. I love renegade!Garrus and his takedown by paragon!Kaidan.

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Re: The Sad Man Behind Blue Eyes 4/4 anonymous August 13 2013, 10:28:37 UTC
A very good, very plausible fill for this prompt, A!A! Thank you for sharing it.

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Re: The Sad Man Behind Blue Eyes 4/4 anonymous August 13 2013, 10:33:34 UTC
Damn A!A, that was awesome. Loved the voices of the characters. I love Garrus, but I like seeing some other sides of him explored. I think this definitely could have happened and after reading this, I'm so glad it didn't! Excellent job!

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Re: The Sad Man Behind Blue Eyes 4/4 anonymous August 14 2013, 04:14:41 UTC
Thank you for writing this A!A! It needed to be done. Garrus can be wonderful but there's a dark vicious little monster living in the back of his head and if you feed it it takes him down very bad paths.

I may love Garrus and not care much for Kaidan but I was cheering for the guy here as he took down the unrepentant murdering bastard Garrus had become. Good fic, it's good to see what different choices can lead to.

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Re: The Sad Man Behind Blue Eyes 4/4 anonymous March 13 2014, 12:55:30 UTC
yasssssss! few people can actually nail Kaidan's voice well. And Garrus was so in character it hurts. Beautiful.

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Re: The Sad Man Behind Blue Eyes 4/4 anonymous May 12 2014, 20:54:54 UTC
Awesome.

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Re: The Sad Man Behind Blue Eyes 4/4 anonymous May 2 2016, 11:16:31 UTC
Wonderful fic...but I kind of wonder if the next target Garrus plan to kill is...Shepard?

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