Re: Home is where the heart is
anonymous
February 28 2014, 03:43:05 UTC
I'm glad you decided to write this!!
I was really looking forward to this prompt being filled. I'm pretty much aware that I'll possibly hate Tali at some point (maybe), but it'll still be worth it!!
And if you need some proof-reading, just to be a bit more confident about posting, let me know - I understand what it's like to write on a non-native language. I haven't seen anything alarming, though. Nothing that would spoil the reading.
Home is where the heart is 3/?
anonymous
March 5 2014, 03:18:51 UTC
"You know," Shepard panted as she snuggled up to Garrus, "I used to wonder whether your little reach and flexibility story wasn't a little exaggerated. Never have I been more glad to be proven wrong
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Thank you for the comments! Glad I'm not failing completely so far. Heh. I'd definitely love to have someone do some proof-reading! I just skipped over the the first part again and already spotted some mistakes. Shouldn't post things when it's five in the morning here.
Next part will probably go online on Sunday. Would've loved to get one up tomorrow or even today, but birthday parties keep you busy!
Re: Home is where the heart is 2/?
anonymous
March 3 2014, 00:29:59 UTC
It was a couple of days later - they had paid the Citadel a visit so Shepard could finally deal with the volus ambassador - and Shepard had just set a course for Noveria, when Joker's voice piped up
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Re: Home is where the heart is 2/?
anonymous
March 3 2014, 05:06:37 UTC
Anon here shares that feeling.. always thougth something is off, when Tali flirts so openly with MY romanced Garrus!!! Oh, no Tali, you will not get Garrus on any of this anon gameplays, I rather save allways the geths!! Ups, Sorry, have I said that aloud?? Anyway... loving this! I'm glad you decide to fill it
Re: Home is where the heart is 2/?
anonymous
March 3 2014, 06:02:54 UTC
Man, do I hate it when other characters flirt with my character's LIs.
Tali's flirtation bothers me more than anything else and I feel Shepard's discomfort on the very heart of me. This story promises some angst moments. I'm loving it!
Re: Home is where the heart is 2/?
anonymous
March 5 2014, 06:02:27 UTC
I love Tali. And I love Garrus. I romance them both on my respective M/FShep playthroughs. Still, reading spoilers about their thing in the main battery through the kinkmeme saved me a LOT of rage during my Thane/Liaramance.
Err, I digress. I also get annoyed with the flirtation between the two when they're in a relationship with Shep, so this prompt is an automatic win. And your fill is lovely. I adore how Garrus is like, "Whoa, this is getting weird. Help!", silently hoping Shep comes to his rescue, while she's a bit oblivious.
Re: Home is where the heart is 3/?
anonymous
March 5 2014, 17:55:22 UTC
Obviously I'm dumb. Or it was just the meds and reading through all of the "The Priiize" memes at three in the morning. Possibly both, and the fact that I've never commented on livejournal before. Somehow the third part ended up right under the first one, so I hope it works this time. If not, just ignore me
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Re: Home is where the heart is
anonymous
March 7 2014, 08:15:58 UTC
My god, I feel this prompt. Tali and my fshep were besties, until she overheard the Tali led flirts. Suddenly, Tali wonders why she's never taken on another mission, or even invited to a certain party. :D
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I was really looking forward to this prompt being filled.
I'm pretty much aware that I'll possibly hate Tali at some point (maybe), but it'll still be worth it!!
And if you need some proof-reading, just to be a bit more confident about posting, let me know - I understand what it's like to write on a non-native language. I haven't seen anything alarming, though. Nothing that would spoil the reading.
Hope to read something more real soon!!
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And this is the reason why I never NOT date Garrus. ^^
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Next part will probably go online on Sunday. Would've loved to get one up tomorrow or even today, but birthday parties keep you busy!
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Ups, Sorry, have I said that aloud??
Anyway... loving this! I'm glad you decide to fill it
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btw great update. I'm so exited for more!
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Tali's flirtation bothers me more than anything else and I feel Shepard's discomfort on the very heart of me.
This story promises some angst moments. I'm loving it!
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Err, I digress. I also get annoyed with the flirtation between the two when they're in a relationship with Shep, so this prompt is an automatic win. And your fill is lovely. I adore how Garrus is like, "Whoa, this is getting weird. Help!", silently hoping Shep comes to his rescue, while she's a bit oblivious.
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