Fate Deals Cruelly

[masterk3y]

Title: Fate Deals Cruelly
Pairing: Minho/Onew and Minho/Jonghyun
Rating: R
Warnings: Angst, cheating.
Summary: Minho can't choose between Onew and Jonghyun.
Word Count: 6,614
Notes: The angst genre for my SHINee Genre Challenge, as requested by towelettepower. This was written over the course of a day, and by the end I was only half conscious. Keke. Thank god

Comments

[cynder8]

this was so sad!! poor onew and jonghyun!! :( they so did not deserve to be treated that way, but i understand minho for falling in love with both of them, i would too! :)

i kinda hated Minho at the end too. asshole! (excuse the language) haha! i kinda wanted him to end up with jonghyun though, boo! (& it looked like he was sorta leaning in that direction, but smart Jonghyun wouldn't take him back) but realistically, neither boys should of forgave him, especially onew. :

[masterk3y]

It is sad! Jonghyun and Onew definitely deserve better! :D Keke. I would fall for both of them too~ ;]

Keke. Yeah, there was definitely a part of me that felt like he'd be better with Jonghyun, but that could just be my jongho bias <.<; Well, yeah. I think there was a part of Minho that wanted to be with him, definitely. And he was because he thought he might have a chance. Jonghyun was smarter than that though. He knew it would only hurt him more to stay. Of course they shouldn't forgive him. Onew deserves a lot better. I almost want to root for Jongyu in this case. I always feel like when one person is cheating on two people, it would be better for those two to run off together. Haha! My mind might work in strange ways.

Thank you for reading, dear! :DDD

[the_night_thief]

Once upon a time, I wrote this awesome comment. Then Frank ate the servers and LJ ate said comment. The end.

So. My rage aside.

I feel bad for Minho. He got himself into a tight spot and then screwed it up. Granted, he got what was coming to him, and Jinki didn't leave him even though he should have, but I digress. Minho got his just desserts. Jinki was lonelyy and took him back. Jonghyun left them both behind. Sad and cruel, but true and for the best.

I loved how bittersweet it was.

[masterk3y]

Oh Frank! What a dirty goat.

Mhmm~ I feel bad for Minho. I must really love to put him in bad situations <.<; Yeah, Minho got what he deserved :( I think the one I feel most sorry for is Onew though :'( Still being stuck in that after what happened. But maybe he'll gain the strength to move on too.

Thank you! I enjoyed it even though it made me sad ^.^ It's sad how much I like writing depressing things. Thank you so much for reading this! And for taking the time to comment again. <333

[rainstormraider]

LOL.
LOVE IT.

If Minho cheated on Jinki because he felt something else with someone else then its clear he didn't love him enough.
Its so fucked up.
I kinda feel bad for Minho even though I shouldn't.
When someone else comes along and you start questioning everything, that's when you know you should let your first love go and begin again with someone new.

[masterk3y]

Yay! I'm glad you love it :DDD

Yes, you're exactly right. His feelings are obviously not strong enough for Jinki, but sadly he couldn't let him go. Yeah, I feel bad for all of them actually.

Thanks for reading and commenting, bb! It means a lot to me <3

[lyckligurl]

i'm truly sorry for onew. he was too naive to give a trust to minho again. minho is much more cruel to onew than jonghyun. jonghyun's hurt and devastated and broken by the act of minho but at least after that he knows about the true state. not with onew, he was betrayed and deceived again. i'm sure their relationship won't long lasting because minho do lie to restart it. *sigh*
thank you for sharing.

[masterk3y]

I feel really bad for Onew too ;_;
Yes. Ultimately Minho was more cruel to Onew than to Jonghyun, but I think there were several reasons behind that. It might have been very different if he'd spoken to Onew first. Either way, it's not a happy ending :(
Thank you for commenting! <3

[ext_821412]

But every time he lay awake in the dead of night, Jinki sleeping soundly next to him, he would remember, and it always felt like something was missing.

i was fine until i read the last sentence - then i almost burst into tears.

beautiful writing as always, and the story kept me on the edge of my seat because i couldn't tell where it was going. will jinki and jonghyun meet, will one of them see catch them? will they have a conspiracy when minho tries to make-up with them and tell each other that minho lied to onew??

masterpiece. will forever have this link saved on my computer.

[masterk3y]

I know! I think this least sentence was one of the first parts that I really figured out. I love having the last sentence pack a hard punch, you know? I spent so long making sure it was worded just the way I wanted it X_X

Thank you so much! :D I'm so glad you liked it, dear!