Fate Deals Cruelly

[masterk3y]

Title: Fate Deals Cruelly
Pairing: Minho/Onew and Minho/Jonghyun
Rating: R
Warnings: Angst, cheating.
Summary: Minho can't choose between Onew and Jonghyun.
Word Count: 6,614
Notes: The angst genre for my SHINee Genre Challenge, as requested by towelettepower. This was written over the course of a day, and by the end I was only half conscious. Keke. Thank god

Comments

[oconje]

I'm really impressed with this story and your writing. It flowed so naturally, kept me on the edge of my seat and the story line and emotions expressed are so real. You write like you are much older and have had a lot of relationship experience. Love isn't a fairy tale (at least not for very long) and humans make mistakes. The ending was really appropriate, bittersweet and open ended. Five stars, even though I kept hoping for a happy Onho ending.

[masterk3y]

Thank you so much! <3 I'm glad that you felt like it had a nice flow, because honestly I was a little nervous about that part of it.

Keke. I write like I'm really experienced, huh? Well, I'll leave that as a mystery, but regardless I'm glad that I can portray these characters in a way that feels realistic to you. :DDD

Thank you so much! This comment made me very happy ^.^

[jinkibumiminho]

[sobs]
No way for a happy ending here.
This is so honest and realistic. As an [ahem] adult with certain [ahem] experiences in this field, it really hit home. Minho's struggle to choose struck a chord. You made him seem sympathetic even as I wanted to smack him for cheating.

Hooray for Jonghyun for dumping his cheating ass. Jinki deserves better, too. Minho should have had the balls to apologize and move on.

Wonderful story. Very moving.

[masterk3y]

;_; No, there really isn't anyway for it to be happy. Cheating can do that :(

Aww, I'm sorry that you've had those experiences, but I'm happy to hear that it's realistic. I can't say I've had this exact kind of drama in a relationship, but I'm not completely inexperienced with it ^.^;

Yes. Jinki should dump him too, and Minho shouldn't stay with him, especially not when he couldn't choose who he wanted to be with more. It's really a cruel thing to do.

Thank you so much! <3

[masterk3y]

Thank you! I'm glad you love them! :DDD

Minho was so dumb in this, ugh. But you might be right. I think he felt more passionate about Jonghyun, but who knows. I don't think he'll ever know :'(

Thanks for commenting! <3

[ennxeli]

Alright, the great feeling of being somewhat illiterate because there's not enough words and symbols to express every emotion and opinion that ran through my mind while reading this piece

[masterk3y]

I cannot begin to describe how this comment made me feel! You have now commented on two of the small number of fics I'm most proud of

[ennxeli]

I simply must point out the fact that the undestandind that you make your characters human consciously (that really sounds like you're writing most your fics about mold or reptilia) is really awesome. It's something I always find myself struggling with fear that the characters may come out too static and 2D. That's a good guality being confident and in control of your story

[fiar22]

I can't even. OH MY GOD. Why.

it is perfect. Just perfect. SOOO HEART WRENCHING. gnbkjsdgfkhjdkfjsgbnfg I loved it. I still think it's kind of weird that he stayed with jinki. but I liked that he did. I'm not coherent rn though....

THE END THOUGH. WHAT THE HELL GURL./ dsfjklfgnhkljfgnhkj WHY it was like perfect and they were together and then it's like zdxkfjsgdskfgkgfj "SOMETHING WA SMISISNGfD" nwhwhtyhthyh

ugygh

I would write you a more coherent comment, but all these feels man. All these feels.

[masterk3y]

I thought I replied to this ... <.<; *eyes livejournal*
Thank you though! ^.^ I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much! :D