cant decide which of my entries is the best... i'll just say

mina loy and my feminist spill and .... george orwell and my abuse of english spill...

but if u see another and think its good.... pick that one:P

Ok, I guess for this creative I have to be off stage voices or narration that I was in our part of under milk wood.

What the fuck is going on here? Is this a dream or what? As the narrator I’m supposed to know what’s going on but really I’m just jabbering on in a very bad welsh accent and hoping that it ties in with that these people are dreaming, ( Read more... )

George Orwell’s essay on the abuse of English is extremely relevant in today’s English speaking world… though I would like to look at in a different way. Though there is sometimes beauty in simplicity as a literature student and as a result of my education over the past 20 years, I can’t help but be defensive of the flowery use of English, ( Read more... )

            Feminism, is it relevant in today’s world? Hell yeah...  though I think the most interesting thing I have heard when contemplating and discussing the feminist movement is that it is women, more so than men who are the main hinderers of the women’s liberation. One only has to listen to the discussion of women, both young and old, and ( Read more... )

Areas of fields, farming, rural, with only scatterd trees, trees that you would run to for shelter in a storm, only to be struck by lighting.

Fear of being chased through fields, as the sun sets, they are damp, a figure in an overcoat is chasing me, while it pours. The landscape of the empty field with the scattered trees haunts me. The barreness, ( Read more... )

comment on ellisa's ljhey there ellisa, what a beautifullu stirrying poem you have written here. the way u have connected deeply with the theme of the war poetry we have been reading for the past two weeks is truly mesmorising.

the final stanza evokes such a feeling in me, i am almost moved to tears, what a beautiful sadness u have portrayed here.

i ( Read more... )

In the first 2 weeks of this semester, I would have to say that Wilfred Owen’s Dulce Et Decorum Est, was the poem that resonated most with me.

Owen’s poetic description of world war one, was, I feel a very powerful artistic technique. His first stanza brings about the atmosphere of the war. The simile, of coughing like hags, and the emotive use of ( Read more... )

hey sorry, it wasnt until a little while ago i realised i haddent made a posting of the 3 i wanted 2 b marked ( Read more... )

Commented on 1st years, aussielatina's poetry ( Read more... )

A complete newness ( Read more... )