Comments | maxegirl1313: AKA Five Crew Members Who Found About +1Who Already Knew

maxegirl1313

AKA Five Crew Members Who Found About +1Who Already Knew

Feb 01, 2010 19:29

( The Bridge crew defiantly had their thoughts on how Kirk would act as a child. They knew he would be cute, mischievous and was probably a generally chatty child, if his behavior now had any relevancy what-so-ever in how he was a child. Turns out, it didn't. )

fanfic, star trek, gen

Comments 27

jiori_seth February 2 2010, 02:26:39 UTC

I really like this, and I've been watching over this fic the WHOLE TIME~ :D

I'm so glad you finished it! And I really adore how you handled Cupcake; this made ME like him, too! :)

This whole thing was just so well done! :D

I really want to see Re-aged Jim's interaction with the rest of his crew now that they, uh, know more about him.

In any case; I loved this, and I'm really glad I got to read it, so thanks! :D

~J

maxegirl1313 February 7 2010, 03:59:57 UTC

Thanks so much for reading + commenting!

Also: Yeah, I totally want to see their reactions too. (Stop tempting me, I sense a plot tribble coming on)

jem80 February 2 2010, 03:24:28 UTC

Wow, Cupcake FTW! This fic was awesome. I loved the way you handled the crew's interactions with lil Jim. Spock's part in particular made me tear up. Well done!

maxegirl1313 February 7 2010, 04:00:37 UTC

Thanks a bunch!

starswillfallxx February 2 2010, 04:42:44 UTC

i adore cupcake in this.no seriously...he's probably my favorite in this for some reason. argh.ill comment again when im slightly more coherent

maxegirl1313 February 7 2010, 04:01:24 UTC

Dude, I know. After this I really really like Cupcake, who knew! Anyway, thanks for reading!

ivorysilk February 2 2010, 05:10:17 UTC

Loved this. Also, if you need a beta, I will totally offer :-)

maxegirl1313 February 7 2010, 04:02:49 UTC

Thanks for reading!

Also: Thank you so so much. A friend of mine just recently started beta-ing my fics but thanks so much! If she ever can't for some reason, do you think I might be able to ask for your help?

ivorysilk February 7 2010, 06:08:55 UTC

Of course--I've got busy periods at work, so there may be occasional times I'm not able to, but the offer is always open--just ask, and if I can, I would be more than happy to do read it over--I'm pretty picky about grammar and spelling stuff, which it looks to me is mostly what you'd be looking for. This fic was adorable, and your characterizations were great.

slashqueen15 February 2 2010, 05:14:08 UTC

Haha. success in the grandest :) a great end, that was fabulous

maxegirl1313 February 7 2010, 04:03:13 UTC

Thanks so much!