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mb_lucified

[Fic] For You (너를 위해)

Jan 09, 2013 01:00

Title: For You (너를 위해)
Pairing: Yunjae
Genre: AU. Angst. Fluff.
A/N: Inspired by Im Jaebum's 너를 위해 (For You) by Chae Jeongeun.
Summary: Kim Jaejoong always thought of himself as an efficient hitman. Life was dull and easy for him until Jung Yunho came bursting in like a freight train of sunshine on the loose.

( I know that you are the only person who can help me live properly in this world. )

length: oneshot, pairing: yunjae

Comments 18

wasur3naid3 January 8 2013, 18:14:56 UTC

OMG.... this is beautifully written
I'm going to cry....... :(

mb_lucified January 17 2013, 16:21:18 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting!!! :D
*passes tissues*

miszc January 8 2013, 18:27:33 UTC

They both died??
This is very heartbreaking. I can't evennn..... :( I'm hoping for a day off of Han Jaejoon but..

mb_lucified January 8 2013, 18:29:36 UTC

What I had in mind was Noona knocking Jaejoong unconscious with the grip of her gun just to shut him up since she didn't want anyone to find them in that alley...

Thank you for reading and commenting~ ^^

miszc January 9 2013, 14:57:27 UTC

Oh? HAHAHA! Lol my mind think the worst of it LOL
anyways, is Yunho.... unable to survive?
cos if yes, then thats sooo sad! :(
But its a good story nonetheless .. >.< Very like it!

mb_lucified January 10 2013, 07:00:15 UTC

Hahaha sorry if the end didn't come across too cleary. But yes I never had the intention of Yunho surviving haha. (oh wait I shouldn't be laughing at that :/)

Thank you very much! :D

ultamatempa January 8 2013, 19:16:38 UTC

i was just starting to get hopeful that jae would get out of it, but whyyyy?

dilovesyunjae January 9 2013, 00:16:21 UTC

Oh no!!!! My yunnie!

snow_meow January 9 2013, 18:43:16 UTC

this is a well written fic.

Jaejoong tries to stay focus and distant himself from people at uni.
yet, there is no way he can distance himself form Yunho.
It's like Yunho is a force that makes him learn his humanity again.

It's so sad that in the end, the only way to be together is in death.
So tragic.

mb_lucified January 10 2013, 06:57:27 UTC

Hmmm what I had in mind for the ending was that Noona knocked Jaejoong out because he was making so much noise someone was bound to notice them. Noona wouldn't kill her Jaejoonie; she loves him too much for that. ^^;;

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you've interpreted the whole Yunjae dynamics the way I intended them to be. :D