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mb_lucified

[Fic] And Now The Story Begins

Jan 16, 2013 18:33

Title: And Now The Story Begins
Pairing: Yunjae
Summary: Jung Yunho served a man who was pale as fresh snow, with hair as dark as night, and pouty red lips. Oh and he had unusually long canines too. But if he was caged within the walls of his master's castle, then he was his willing prisoner.

( “I am exceptionally gifted in convincing people to do things my way; I’m sure you wouldn’t want to know what my methods are.” )

length: oneshot, pairing: yunjae

Comments 46

donud January 16 2013, 11:19:27 UTC

Gyaaaa!!!! Love it"

mb_lucified January 17 2013, 15:55:06 UTC

Thank you! :D

jaeshire_cat January 16 2013, 11:31:38 UTC

love this! tod!jae~~ <3

mb_lucified January 17 2013, 15:55:27 UTC

Thank you! ^^

muramatsu_aoi January 16 2013, 12:03:55 UTC

I can actually relate MV jae to your fic here. He doesn't strike me as the Twilight type vampire- but something more dangerous & sensual Tod!Jae. And I really like the fact he didn't really make a 'grand gesture' to show that he cared- his was in those little and important things..

any chances for writing a continuation? the fic!verse is quite addicting.

mb_lucified January 17 2013, 15:58:01 UTC

I don't read Twilight, so I don't get how their vampires are (I do know they sparkle in the sun and drink animal blood though ^^), but I'm a Dracula type of vampire fan. ^^;; RWAR scary (and sweet) vampire!Jae! 8D

I'm quite done with this verse; doubt I'll be doing a sequel or anything... ^^;;

Thank you for reading and commenting! <3 I'm glad you liked it. ^^

sumiko January 16 2013, 12:29:14 UTC

Anamsjisisjs omg. Omg. Omg. Best vampire story I have ever read. AJAJSJSJSJS let me love you. Omg this is amazing.

mb_lucified January 17 2013, 15:58:29 UTC

Thank you so much!!! <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

octopuskimchi January 16 2013, 13:23:48 UTC

I thought you were inspired by the teaser, it's gorgeous isn't it :).

I enjoyed this story and how jae teased yunho

Ahhhhh when is the video coming out ???

mb_lucified January 16 2013, 13:59:16 UTC

Lol I wasn't. XD So I was all OMG KIM JAEJOONG ARE YOU STALKING ME when the teaser came out. I actually had my notebook opened in front of my computer as I was watching the teaser lol. *goosebumps* It is so so pretty. Mostly because of that beautiful guy in it. XD

Video's out tonight at midnight Korean time! (in about an hour from now)

Thank you for reading and commenting! ^^;;

i just watched the video.. octopuskimchi January 16 2013, 16:20:00 UTC

... so many feels!

Re: i just watched the video.. mb_lucified January 16 2013, 16:23:49 UTC

IKR. Feeling pretty freaked out because I initially wanted to include a scene of Jaejoong playing a grand piano in here but decided against it in the end AND THEN THE SONG HAD A PIANO BRIDGE. 8D

I don't know how I'm going to sleep tonight.... He's so beautiful. <3

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