Comments | mcgrjc6: [Fic] Haptic Black; One-shot

mcgrjc6

[Fic] Haptic Black; One-shot

Jul 19, 2008 02:35

Title: Haptic Black
Rating: PG-13 for language and violence
Pairing: none
Genre: AU Crack-action - I don’t know
Summary: ( They were a well-oiled machine, the five of them. They were also the best money could buy, that is, if you wanted someone dead. )

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blackblood0688 July 19 2008, 07:56:59 UTC

LOL! That was really cool!! I could totally imagine this in my head!! ^_^b You should write more like this! It was really fun to read!

mcgrjc6 July 19 2008, 08:01:03 UTC

Ah thanks you! *blushes* I usually don't write much, but when inspiration hits me...y'know?

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!~♥~ It makes my heart go 'dugun dugun' XDDD

blackblood0688 July 19 2008, 08:21:18 UTC

Yeah~ I understand completely! Aww~ That's too bad, cuz you write really pretty well!~

<33~

mcgrjc6 July 19 2008, 08:32:17 UTC

LOL you should tell that to my beta! But thank you anyway! I'll try to write more when the inspiration strikes!

roselit July 19 2008, 08:06:56 UTC

ultimate betaing, hahaha~ XD; ♥ i was honored that you wanted me to beta. ;D

i already flailed over this to you over gmail, but -- i love the bickering & cracky humor in this so much. XD;
it's like wicked killer agents! then the screaming, kicking, yelling.. ahhh. XD; ♥

p.s. i want jaejoong to win! XD he so won. ♥

mcgrjc6 July 19 2008, 08:13:02 UTC

Jaejoong totally owned the competition. He SO won! I thought about you when I was writing his character and choosing who was going to win. I also just kinda wanted to give it to Yunho because of his ass-ish-ness at the beginning. And I love it when the leader doesn't act like it!~♥

When they fight and bicker like that you know that they are that much closer, right?

THANKS FOR READING, BETAING, READING AGAIN, AND COMMENTING!!! I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH!!!!

spinintriangles July 19 2008, 08:31:35 UTC

akldjfkadsjf AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME *______*
*has been reduced to a parrot*

gosh. i loved every one of these characters. you managed to give them all such individual personalities. junsu and his baby <333333333

more, please. *___*

mcgrjc6 July 19 2008, 08:35:03 UTC

Gosh! THANK YOU!!! *feeds you crackers* Keep that up and I'll give you a job boosting my writer!ego. LOL

Junsu's very protective, ne?

Umm... it was meant to be a one-shot, but if I think of another mission for them to do, I'll make it a two shot!

Thanks for reading and commenting!!!~♥~

arakasu July 19 2008, 09:26:32 UTC

LOL LOL LOVE IT :D

If possible...continue? :DDDDDDDD

mcgrjc6 July 19 2008, 09:27:50 UTC

LOL maybe if I think of more witty adventures for them to get into...

Thanks for reading and commenting darling!~♥~

cherrieeme July 19 2008, 10:08:03 UTC

LOL!

this was fun to read :P

someone should start fic like this. D:
!!

mcgrjc6 July 19 2008, 19:29:14 UTC

I SO agree! Not enough assassin fics out there! >o<

I'm glad that you liked it! Makes me all fuzzy and warm inside!!!

Man, I can only think of two other fics similar to this...I could suggest some if you want?

Thanks SO SO SO SO SO much for reading and commenting! You guys make my day :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

cherrieeme July 19 2008, 23:58:10 UTC

OH! =DD

these assassin/DBSK fics exists?!?!?

YAY~!

please recommend :P

YOURWELCOME ;)
please write more!

mcgrjc6 July 20 2008, 00:18:41 UTC

Ok...let's see there's a really good one Changmin-centric DBSK assassin fic called Fragment of Lies by ianinna here at her writing journal. Then there's a JaeYooSu!Assassin and HoMin!police fic called The Killer's Nightmare by sammirish here. That's chapter 9 but all subsequent chapter are linked.

Lastly, and this is shamless plugging, myself and my friend roselit wrote a collab. JaeMin assassin fic entitled Obsidian which you can check out on her writing journal here

Definitely check out all of them!