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mcprobious

(2/?) Breakfast at McProbie's

Jun 12, 2011 21:05

Title: Breakfast at McProbie's
Rating: PG13 (subject to change for later chapters)
Pairing: DiNozzo/McGee
Summary: Tony decides that a guys night with McProbie is just what the doctor ordered to cure his boredom. He doesn't know is that he's about to get more than he's bargained for.
Disclaimer: I do not own NCIS, Tony DiNozzo, or Timothy McGee ( Read more... )

dinozzo/mcgee, ncis fanfiction, tony/timothy, fanfiction

Comments 8

lil_jei June 13 2011, 05:19:43 UTC

Elevator scene...love it!

mcprobious June 13 2011, 05:21:05 UTC

Aww. Thanks. Glad you did! <3

grey853 June 13 2011, 13:35:59 UTC

Cute make out session in Gibbs's office. *g*

Also, in this line,"I do not where stockings." It should be wear, not where.

mcprobious June 14 2011, 01:03:11 UTC

It's actually in the elevator, not in Gibb's office.

Thank you. I'll fix the word.

grey853 June 14 2011, 05:54:20 UTC

Gibbs's office is the elevator!! That's where he always holds his private meetings because it's one of the only place there's no camera.

mcprobious June 14 2011, 18:07:50 UTC

Ahaha. Now I get it. You're right. :p Kudos!

xyphoidmax June 14 2011, 03:22:45 UTC

Hehehe! I love it! Can't wait for another installment! Great job!

mcprobious June 14 2011, 04:06:20 UTC

Thank you so much!!!!