Fiction about the married folks, for Limmenel.

[chiromancy]

Title: All their personal belongings have intertwined
Author: chiromancy
Written for: limmenel. I am LAME, and LATE, and I beg your forgiveness.
Prompt: Gerard/Frank and Lyn-Z/Jamia, a wife-swap type thing.
Rating: NC-17
Other nonsense/summary/spoilers/notes: Full disclosure--I love this prompt, but I still had to email MCee in a state of angstful brain-fail: "I

Comments

[spleenjournal]

*scrapes brains from the top of my skull*

Hoodamn.

[mivsi]

it's like. i have something to say, but i can't figure out how to word it. it was amazing and hot and i would pick out a favorite part and then read more and realize, no, that's my favorite. there were too many parts like that - it was awesome. like. you sound pretty unsure over this but, man. i'm still not saying what i want to say, which is frustrating, so: jesusfuck. ♥.

[crowgirl13]

This is brilliant. Since the bigbangs, I've been praying for *someone* to explore the dynamic between these four... and this is so much better than anything I'd hoped for. I love how you draw out the relationships and increase the tension throughout. I love the contrast between the two sex scenes and how there's so much that *isn't* said in conversations throughout. And that is without a doubt, the hottest piece of femmeslash I've ever read.

Sorry about the vague feedback - normally I try to get more detailed, but I'm reading this at work. I did want to say that I was sad to see the story end; I could read about this AU bit of the future forever.

Though I have to say - poor Mikey. :(

[peridium]

God, I am kind of at a loss for words. I liked this, a lot. The dynamics between them, all of them, the married couples and Frank and Gerard with their flame that's been burning for so long, and Jamia and Lyn-Z with this sort-of-new thing between them, and just. Yes. ♥

[xsnarkasaurus]

ngh. so many times i burst into giggles, and then the porn was hooooooot. they're *wonderful*. so much love for this fic, th ank you for sharing. :D