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yeast (foster's bakery au)

Apr 23, 2010 05:25

Title: Yeast
Author: Cesare (almostnever)
Word count: ~1500
Ratings/Warnings: SFW. Cursing, kissing. This story should be safe for people with triggers.
Summary: Rodney rescues John from the dough monster. Inspired by this cartoon by chkc. Part of the Foster's Bakery AU.

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( 'I've had a few experiments go awry in my time, but none of them ever tried to take over my kitchen counter. Or my head.' )

author:almostnever

Comments 101

mercury973 April 23 2010, 15:02:37 UTC

Cookies is the correct response to any and all heroic deeds. ♥

almostnever April 23 2010, 22:33:07 UTC

EXACTLY. :-)

gottalovev April 23 2010, 15:04:01 UTC

so very cute and sweet =D

I loved this line, could see it so clearly:

John looks at him from under his lashes; it's not deliberately coy this time, and maybe for that reason, a lot more devastating. "No point setting two alarm clocks," he suggests.

almostnever April 23 2010, 22:36:10 UTC

This is totally a move in the Sheppard repertoire. I was thinking of that moment in Rising when John practically blows Sumner a kiss. :D

Thanks!

crysothemis April 23 2010, 15:12:31 UTC

Eeeeeee, love!

Fabulous twist of metaphor, and I love the Rodney of this 'verse, with his uncertainty so tangled with his desire, and John! Goofy, pouty, sexy baker!John.

♥

almostnever April 23 2010, 22:42:09 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you!

sabinelagrande April 23 2010, 15:21:42 UTC

Awww, boys! <3

almostnever April 23 2010, 22:42:26 UTC

♥!

antares04a April 23 2010, 15:31:01 UTC

This is very cute!
Although I can understand Rodney's fascination to find out what happens when the dough and John's hair meet. *bg*

almostnever April 23 2010, 22:43:32 UTC

Hee, waiting to see was so tempting for a moment there! :D