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Cat's Birthday HP Drabblethon IV

Apr 22, 2007 00:00

Sorted: 149 prompts! Blame the Cat(s).

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For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 22 2007, 01:27:26 UTC

Recipient: cheshyre
Prompt: Narcissa + Neville *NOT* noncon
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG-13, maybe

She watched her lover while he slept. He was the same age as her son, but with kindness she’d never known with her husband; and the maturity she despaired of ever seeing in her only child.

Subterfuge wasn’t his greatest strength; she’d known precisely why he’d come to her in the beginning. That presumption might have cost him dearly, once. Not now, after so many days listening to her fears followed by nights crying out in his arms as he ensured her pleasure before taking his own.

Tomorrow, Narcissa would tell Neville where to find the Lestranges. All of them.

Re: For Cheshyre cheshyre April 22 2007, 01:58:30 UTC

Thank you for getting exactly what I was hoping for...

Re: For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 23 2007, 01:19:13 UTC

Oh yay! I was trying to find a plausible angle to bring the two together, and this seemed most likely.

Actually, given time I'd dearly love to develop this further into a longer story. There was a lot I had to leave untold!

Re: For Cheshyre webbapettigrew April 22 2007, 03:07:37 UTC

Oh, I liked this. It was sweet and I love the last line.

Re: For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 23 2007, 01:21:57 UTC

Thank you! Once I got the idea for the last line I finally figured out which way to take the rest of the drabble!

Re: For Cheshyre midnitemaraud_r April 22 2007, 04:48:59 UTC

Yay Neville! Lovely!

Re: For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 23 2007, 01:22:38 UTC

Neville rocks, totally.

Thanks! :))

Re: For Cheshyre archon_mentha April 22 2007, 05:14:23 UTC

Hee! I love the last line - good that she appreciates him! ♥

Re: For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 23 2007, 01:23:50 UTC

Thanks! Kindness is Neville's secret weapon! :D

♥

Re: For Cheshyre troubleinchina April 22 2007, 09:03:03 UTC

Oh my.

Re: For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 23 2007, 01:25:56 UTC

Hee! Thanks! :))

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Re: For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 23 2007, 01:26:25 UTC

Oh, thank you! I'm glad you think so! :D

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Re: For Cheshyre coffee_n_cocoa April 23 2007, 01:53:17 UTC

Thank you! It was surprisingly easy to write once I figured out the angle I wanted to take (plus it helps that I really enjoy writing Neville). :))

Re: For Cheshyre j_lunatic April 22 2007, 13:23:43 UTC

Such a beautiful take on the prompt.

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