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crossing_by March 11 2010, 15:10:41 UTC
WOW .... i plan it save it until you give me the epilogue but somehow cant stop reading it

again
WOW!

i will wait for the end ...

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harangkaori March 11 2010, 15:29:48 UTC
SPOT

omgosh this is getting sadder already
i dont wanna see the ending!

oh dear....
i really want yunjae to be together

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ellen611 March 11 2010, 15:41:02 UTC
I am very dazed at the moment.
Just read all your 5 chapters in one sitting.
How did Yunho turn so ....so...uncontrollable??
Being a model, he could have anyone for the taking....am really dazed now....but really good story line.
Can't wait for your next update....please hurry...very anxious!!

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meer_sshi March 12 2010, 04:25:00 UTC
Sometimes, lust is more powerful then self-control i guess... :S

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ndy_cn March 11 2010, 17:14:13 UTC
hmmmm I just realized that there's two or more people standing on the door way ("their wide eye") could it be Changmin and Jae's mom?
Omoooo now I think Yunho really used Jaejoong for his body only -_-" how could you do that to him you a**hole >o<
I can't wait to read how the story end, well at beginning of the story, if I'm not mistake, there will be a character death, so my guess JJ will go to hospital for treatment and after that he go to school with Changmin while yunho, after he realized he's bastard and Jae's mom put him in jail, decided to kill himself because he's scared to be raped at jail and feel guilty. And maybe, hopefully, there will be a love blossom between Jae and Min since Min will help Jae to get through all the horrible experience.
Well that's my happily ever after version though, I hope yours will be better ^^
Can't wait for the update bb! *send yunjae candy as a bribe*

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meer_sshi March 12 2010, 04:32:16 UTC
Oh. Oops. :s No there's really just one person in the doorway and it's his mom. I just wrote it like that to make the person sound anonymous. If you're familiar with French, it's the same principal as "Leur".

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meer_sshi March 12 2010, 04:32:51 UTC
Oh lol and thankies for the YunJae candy :P

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makusrocks101 March 11 2010, 18:52:52 UTC
Hmmmmm.. Welll.. I think.. His mom wont be angry.. ahha Thats just hope.. AAAAAnnnd Yunho is crazy.. How could he do that~~

-Sigh- SO it will be in minnies POV? Neat.. Cant waittt~~ XD

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meer_sshi March 12 2010, 04:34:52 UTC
hehehe.... But think why would the epilogue be in Min's POV if the whole story's in JJ's POV? *hinting hinting*

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