Obscurity

[mel0804]

Pairing: Ennis/Jack
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17 (Warning: violence !)
Summary: AU_AU. This is a story about fear, uncertainty and doubt but also about friendship and love. Ennis and Jack meet each other in the modern time.
Dedication: This story is dedicated to my German beta tanzmaeusi, who encouraged me to write this story. I also want to thank judy-blue-cat who helped me

Comments

[marianv]

Hello, I've just read the prologue and the chapters so far and I have to tell you that, in my opinion, your story has one of the better introductions in bbm slash neighborhood. I want to thank you too, because you have help me to improve my English vocabulary!. I'm waiting for the next eagerly.
María.

[mel0804]

Thank you ;-).
If you want to read more of my stories that are already translated in English please let me know. I'll add you to my friendslist then.

[mel0804]

Hab Dich hinzugefügt - die Spannung steigt... ;-).

[el_wing]

This was beautiful. I love Ennis as a caretaker with his kind hands and heart. The images use paint for us are riveting. Thanks so much. I can't wait for the next chapter.

el

[bbmjack324]

Awesome. Ennis innately knew Jack needed nim, and he was there by his side. He cares for Jack so much, and took al good care of him. Bravo.

One of them quiet and full of strength, the other one trembling and forced, they melted together and became one rich sound of life and the proof of the fact that they were not alone....

Nearly a child he seemed when his face was not driven by pain, and a feeling of warmth flooded through Ennis that made him dizzy.

[ajjt]

Just discovered this story and am really into it. Your descriptions of the decaying social and environmental fabric are haunting, and mirror the situation that Jack and Ennis are coping with. Looking forward to reading more. Very poignant. Alex

[mel0804]

Hi Alex,

thank you - I'm glad you like this story ;-).
Chapter 5 is already translated.