Too late

[mel0804]

Pairing: Ennis
Rating: dead!Jack

Disclaimer: I am not Annie Proulx and sadly I never will be her - so all recognition for the wonderful original characters Ennis and Jack belongs to her and her alone. I am only borrowing these two heros and I will give them back, I promise. Obviously I make no money from my story, I’m just passing the time.

Comments

[vea_68]

Das ist so traurig! Zu erkennen, dass man etwas FÜR IMMER verloren hat, was man hätte haben können, was sich einem so sehr angeboten hat, zu dem man aber nie bereit war, ...das ist so hart!

Ach wie gerne hätte ich im Film gesehen, wie Ennis nach dieser Postkarte einen Gefühlsausbruch bekommt. Wäre er doch nur auf die Straße gesunken, hätte er doch nur geweint oder geschrien.

Werde nie darüber hinwegkommen!

[poppyhoney_67]

Oh that was heartbreaking. Poor Ennis, realising when its too late what he had, and then to lose it, forever. *sobs* Your writing is so gut-wrenching, but beautiful at the same time.

[fl1789]

those words..And that picture!!
so sad...
nicely writed, thoug Thanks for sharing

[samtyr]

So very sad -- poor Ennis didn't realise how much he was going to lose until it was lost. :(

[sienata]

Dang girl.... I was just all happy over Vicki's post that J & R aren't engaged, and now Jack's dead and I'm crying........ boo hoo.

Great writing though... this part really punched me...

"He felt as if his heart had lost its force to beat steadily in his body and as if his soul was suddenly covered in black.."

Listen to the Soundtrack to Saturday Night Fever and get back to us, ok???

Hugs. :) S!