You Had Me At Hello

Sep 06, 2011 02:03


You had me at hello. - Jerry Maguire
It was the first time she truly open herself to a guy. Sure there were many oppas’ in SM that were more than willing to take care of her or perhaps even more but she was never interested and her unnies made sure that everyone gets the message loud and clear that their maknae is off limits. So it was not well ( Read more... )

one-shot, romance, realistic

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zealous2002 September 6 2011, 03:40:44 UTC
Dear author,
1st;
Thanks for your newest installment. Such a nice story and lovely.
2nd;
I love how you combined all the film quotes with the event of the story. So true. A simple story for a simple and sweet couple. I do believe both of them are just a man and a woman with simple love story which time and places playing a very big part in their lives. It just need a courage, a dream, a destiny and full of love to make it happen, since the base is already there.
3rd;
And choosing Bryan Adams as closure is such a bonus for this fiction.

Thanks
zealous

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melibu7 September 6 2011, 05:35:23 UTC
Dear reader,

1st;
You are most welcome and I am happy that you like it.

2nd;
Yep that's the gist of my story for them. a simple but slightly unconventional love story due to their circumstances. memorable movie quotes are the greatest esp those those you would remember even when you don't truly remember the movie.

3rd;
i love that song!!!

as always thank you for your comment and reading it :)

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danmonique September 6 2011, 03:49:55 UTC
perhaps, it's also a case of right love at
the wrong time... then again, only they know
the real score.

as for your story, it gave me a warm feeling
while reading... there is still the amount of
reality injected on it and at the same time,
a kind of hopeful wish that someday something
like that would happen... at least that was
how it made me feel, correct me if i'm wrong.

thanks for this lovely story.

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melibu7 September 6 2011, 05:44:53 UTC
thanks for leaving a comment and reading it :)

yes they do give us the feeling that true love will prevail all but truly i believe theirs is just a simple story. in a way time and place is playing with them. i always believe that regardless, there is a bond between them that perhaps will surpass many things. they may or may not be together in the end (of cos i hope they will cos i love a good ending to their story) but at the same time, i think that for them to actually cross each other's path it already a great thing for them.

this is just a simple love story of a boy and a girl :)

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hiko27 September 6 2011, 04:32:32 UTC
Oh god, I just love the quotes. I'm a quote addict xDDD Awesome as always! And don't worry, I never really thought of this as a farewell fic. It's as you said, I thought it was closure. But it didn't feel at all lonely or sad. It felt kinda... Happy, sort of, and so realistical. And it's so innocent that I love it! LMAOOOO Reading this after going into a Pendy craze the past few days really healed my Goguma heart again. Thanks :D

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melibu7 September 6 2011, 05:47:20 UTC
i love quotes too... especially those that when you read and it means something of some sort to me. LOL well, its not meant to be a farewell fic. its just that i felt a sense of closure to the whole YS chapter after the duet. plus, beyond that, i really just think that theirs is a just a simple love story.

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melibu7 September 6 2011, 05:48:20 UTC
whooopsss i press send before i could type this - thanks for commenting and reading :)

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hiko27 September 14 2011, 14:08:34 UTC
Who doesn't love quotes? XDDDD True, it's more special in a way if it relates to you. Yeah, it is more like a closure on things about them. Exact words to describe YongSeo: A simple love story. Nothing complicated, just two people exploring and falling in love with each other ;)

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dawnxiamara September 6 2011, 05:20:50 UTC
Friend,
Greeings! In this life, i think we meet our true love once & it's up to us if we accept it or let it go. Time is of the essence, timing, divine intervention and of course favorable circumstances are the major keys to meet so as to produce a good result. But, i think time is not on their side for now. They are busy spreading their beautiful wings to reach their dreams. I just hope in my heart of hearts that they can find time even just a single time so as to pause & analyze that their true love is just near( both are in the the entertainment world) & with our fervent hopes & prayers at the end they will be together for real. Reading your story made me see that they are truly made for each other. Thank you & More power....

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melibu7 September 6 2011, 05:57:07 UTC
Chingu!

Well, for me I think that true love exists but not everyone is fortunate to meet their true love. you can marry the one you love but s/he might not be your true love. then again what is true love? i think its very subjective the definition for individual depending on what their perception are but we both agree that it exists.

like i say, this is just a simple love story about a boy and a girl. so i hope that they will get their happy ending. it may not be with each other but keep fingers cross that it will be.

thanks for commenting and reading :)

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akapugs September 6 2011, 06:32:16 UTC
nicely done again, very innovative the use of quotes to speak about the passage of time and the development of feelings. Love isn't instantaneous, love builds layer upon layer with time to become something special between two people that share it. It's never about timing its simply either there or not. Thank you for writing this.

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melibu7 September 6 2011, 06:59:17 UTC
thanks for commenting and reading! i was waiting for your feedback and *phew* am glad i managed to still keep your interest.

yup the gist of the story as how you put it. perhaps the story might not truly say it all but yes thats the gist. not all story has to be romeo and juliet tragic love story and not everything has to happen now. time may be playing with them in some sense but yes i totally agree that although it might not be in their favor, it is not an excuse. when you want something to happen, you make it happen. no time, not enough time is just an excuse.

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akapugs September 6 2011, 07:07:52 UTC
hahaha, as I said, you are a talented writer and the stories you produce are a joy to read. If i comment or not remember only that one thing, you have a gift for prose.

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akapugs September 6 2011, 07:15:36 UTC
P.S miracles are most of the time seen in the most ordinary and simple things in life. This is what the couple has given us, that the ordinary can hold the most beautiful miracles one can see. If you hold on to that, then you will never lose your muse

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