Awesome new chapter

Sep 24, 2009 23:01

Smoker watched as Ace turned back into the darkness of the alleyway. The sun had since risen, but there was still enough shadow for Ace to disappear into the surrounding area, leaving the other men in the area unaware of that he had ever been present. Smoker turned around and headed back slowly. He saw Tashigi listening to a report from a soldier, ( Read more... )

one piece, smoker/ace, to control, zoro/sanji

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devlinnreiko September 25 2009, 05:04:07 UTC
OH!!!! Another chapter...and and SmoAce!!!!!!!

I can sleep peacefully now knowing there is still SmoAce in the world! ^_________________^

Wonderful chapter. Really missed this fic!

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melisandre013 September 27 2009, 21:46:09 UTC
I felt that Smoker/Ace would fit pretty well in this fic. So I did it. I'm glad you like it. I promise they'll show up again.

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bleufishie September 25 2009, 10:02:41 UTC
I'm so happy to see more of this! I'm not much one for Smoker/Ace (i love them as separate characters, but can't see them as a couple...) I'm just happy that you haven't stopped writing.

*waits not so patiently for the next chapter*

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melisandre013 September 27 2009, 21:46:46 UTC
I'll keep writing. I promise. :D Thanks for commenting.

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sayu_chan September 25 2009, 13:08:59 UTC
I just stumbled over your fic while checking my friends list and needed to read it one go. It's absolutely wonderful and I hope it will go on for many more chapters. I always enjoy reading well written long fics. :-3

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melisandre013 September 27 2009, 21:47:21 UTC
I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I promise there will be many more chapters.

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sventastic September 25 2009, 13:20:21 UTC
Eeeeeeeee another chapter! -hugs you-

And I'm a complete loser because when Smoker, then Tashigi, then Lucci and Kaku, then Ace appeared, I squealed at increasing volume :'D

But thank you for updating, and thank you for donating more SmoAce to the world! :'D

Now I'm going to cross my fingers and see if Sanji's going to be okay. :D

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melisandre013 September 27 2009, 21:48:54 UTC
It's all right. I squealed a bit while writing them. Not really. But I got very excited. Especially the Lucci/Kaku bit.

And, he will be okay. I'm not that mean of a person.

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sventastic September 27 2009, 22:53:07 UTC
Haha, yeah I guessed you were excited x'D

Yey!
(I'd ask if his hands would be okay, but if you answered it'd be dropping to big of a hint. I'll just wait patiently :'>)

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anonymous September 26 2009, 01:32:30 UTC
OMG! I am so glad you updated. It made my day. I follow your stories obsessively. The writing is always fantastic. I can't wait to see how you start to incoporate other characters *cough*shanks*cough*. The scene between smoker and ace is perfectly angsty. I am not going to speculate of that couple's future, but I can't wait to see what you do.Keep writing!

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melisandre013 September 27 2009, 21:52:14 UTC
Thank you so much. I really love that you are enjoying it so much.

Shanks. Well. We'll see...I believe I did mention him at some point.

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