Comments | melliie: 16 - Aoi/Uruha 1/1

melliie

16 - Aoi/Uruha 1/1

Mar 29, 2014 22:43

Title: 16
Chapter: 1/1
Rating: G
Pairing: Aoi/Uruha
Genre: Romance
Synopsis: Kouyou has wings, and Yuu holds on.

( They are like crushed gold. )

Comments 4

jrock_truelove April 1 2014, 00:06:23 UTC

This is so beautiful!!!! Keep writing love ♡♡

melliie April 1 2014, 00:15:52 UTC

Ah~ Thank you <3

krasivayadusha April 1 2014, 17:31:02 UTC

Ah! You've posted more fic :3 I just checked and saw you posted another one the other day...I'll have to check that out soon, as well ;)

The biggest thing to strike me about your writing is quite simply that you have a very unique style. It's beautiful - descriptive and moving, but not in a super conventional way. The way you utilize adj and adv not only gives your style a very pretty (D: I want to describe it better, but my words are failing me now) aura, but it really encourages the reader to engage and read with care. Does that make sense? Like, to grasp the full piece you can't just gloss over this with a quick 2 minute read - you have to take your time, and that pairs really well with your style. Those elements together give like, a nice almost lilted pace ( at least when *I* read it, haha).

Woah I rambled D: Sorry about that. But yeah, keep writing and cultivating your style, darling! It's very unique and I look forward to seeing more from you :)

melliie April 2 2014, 04:11:30 UTC

Hi~ Thank you for reading :3

Ah I always try to describe significant people/events/things in a poignant way, though I hope the descriptions are not too much!~ I feel that even though adj, adv, and descriptions are wonderful, an overload of these can sometimes overshadow the messages, characters, and the underlying themes of the fic. Haha~ hopefully this was a fun read for you <3

Please take good care of yourself! Thank you so much for always being such a darling to me :)

<3