Fairy Tale Rewrite

[mellybean385]

So I finally finished my story this morning and sent it in by e-mail. For those who want to read it, there's a link to it below. I thought that it was way too large to put into LJ.

I would greatly appreciate any constructive criticism. Are there elements that make no sense? Any plot suggestions? Help with title (the current one stinks)?

Comments

[lisa_go_blind]

Sorry I haven't given any feedback yet. I haven't had time to read it. I'll try to get with it soon but this week is really busy for me.

[mellybean385]

It's ok, take your time. I'm definitely not in any hurry. For the paper itself, well, I'm just trying to put it behind me.