So I finally finished my story this morning and sent it in by e-mail. For those who want to read it, there's a link to it below. I thought that it was way too large to put into LJ.
I would greatly appreciate any constructive criticism. Are there elements that make no sense? Any plot suggestions? Help with title (the current one stinks)?
mellybean385
Mar 16, 2004 07:32
Holy shit, it's snowing again!