Aoi/Uruha, one-shot, "Infatuated."

[mendacity_x]

 

Comments

[scottskydweller]

wow... the way you started the fic was indeed interesting!
i love the way you wrote this "As the bell signaling the beginning of class rang, Aoi could still be found leaning on the locker next to an imaginary blonde figure." --> hahahahhahahaha.....

oh yeah, i had been wondering where have you been.
since i missed your fic sooooo much!

hmm, have you got your personal stuff sorted out?
i hope that you are ok...

[mendacity_x]

Whoa, you were fast xD
Poor Aoi, huh? All he wanted was a little bit of love ^^

Oh dear, I can't have you missing it that much! I'm hoping to have the next chapter written this week since I've already written 500-ish words for it.

I thought everything was cleared up and then one of my friends turns around and messes it all up again. I guess this is as good as it gets xD

Thank you for reading and commenting. It definitely makes me feel better ^^
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[scottskydweller]

i think i comment on the chapters most of the time...
since i really love the way the plot evolves...
how is aoi gonna deal with that spoilt brat and what happens next... lol...

hmm.... i love the way you have brought out the slow development of this oneshot...
are you writing a sequel?

[mendacity_x]

I'm writing that bit right now, actually. It's harder than I thought ^^'
Even though Akemi's a brat, I have to make it seem natural xD

Ohhh sequel. I don't know. I have to finish writing the sequel for that other oneshot I did yonks ago. It might be fun for this one though, because I like the way Uruha and Aoi interact. I'll see ;D

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[xxshujunnxx]

YOU ARE BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK. 8DDDDDD
AND WITH A FIC.
>D

hobby, this is absolute wiiiin.
aoi, you fail badly.

Uruha defn. wants some, y/y?

*cough*sequuuuuuuuuuelcough*

..
oh who cares about subtlety.

SEQUEL BBY. D:

Wecome back dear. <3
is your ass back in jrock now? 8D

[mendacity_x]

I AM BACK. >D

Don't be hatin' on Aoi, bby. DON'T HATE THE PLAYA, HATE THE GAME.
And of course Uruha wants some. Why else would people write about him? ;DD

OH SEQUEL. I wouldn't know what to write even if I tried.
I guess I can... try?
GIVE ME THREE WORDS AND I'LL WRITE THE SEQUEL ABOUT THEM. (maybe. depends if you use 'sex, rubber duck, seal' or whatev.)

I'm not really IN jrock, but I'm not out either. It's a good place to be.

Thank you for the comment, bb, <3
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[xxshujunnxx]

YEY. WANT SOME CONFETTI?

AOI YOU PLAYA. D<
..
true. 8'D ok, make them get tgt alr. D:

ORLY? yey. :B three words huh..well, with *that* sort of ending you just wrote, its inevitable that:

1)gentle
2)bathtub (rubberducks. 8Dv)
3)sex.

lulz. pretty much writes itself. 8'D
yep. it sure is. to escape from reality. 8D

ok, i shall stop commenting. scarly i end up spamming your comments.
i tend to do that somehow, everytime i comment.
-_-
im full of crap. 8D

[mendacity_x]

OF COURSE I WANT CONFETTI. PURPLE AND GREEN LIKE BARNEY, PLZ. >D

A gent;e bath with a rubber duck that ended up with sex. I like the way you think. But god I suck at writing pronz. If I write it like that, you owe me Saga's head.

I spam my own entries. How sad is that? xD

You're not full of crap. You're full of lovin~~
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[toujin1]

*Does a loony dance* I SEE MY NAME! That makes me super happy :3

I'm glad you're spending more time on LJ...missed you heaps, you silly woman, I hope you managed to work on whatever problems you had...if you need to talk about anything, be sure to poke me!

Great work with the writing, as usual. It's always nice to have a tame(er) Uruha to read about every now and then <3

[mendacity_x]

Yusss, super happy is fun xD

I'm glad I am too, because now I can actually keep up with people (and your posts!) and without LJ I felt really... empty. Like I was skipping something, y'know?

Hahaha, people don't write tame-uha much anymore. Not that I'm complaining; vicious Uru is gorg.

Thank you so much :D
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[the_coconut_dog]

LOL. There were just too many funny things in this fic.
So I punched him!" Uruha finished.
Kai looked at him blankly, "You slapped him, didn't you?"
Defeated, Uruha nodded, "Yeah, I slapped him.

"I lost my virginity, can I have yours?" I might start using this one IRL

"Kai, for some reason I have a feeling that you want to die right now." And this one.

[mendacity_x]

8D I'm glad you found it funny!
Uruha likes to pretend that he's macho and Kai took that away from him. D; how could he?

It's a great conversation starter, really. I dare you to try it. >D

Thank you for taking the time to comment!
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[the_coconut_dog]

haha, I always enjoy it when that happens! Macho but not really .
I will try that, deffo!

[hirachan]

lol love it! ^^ ....mmm there should be another fic continuing from this one!!!

[mendacity_x]

Thanks for the comment :3

I'm glad you like it ^^, and I'm considering a sequel to this, but the question is what would it have in it? xD

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