Mensa AU Fic Exchange: "Radical Treatments" for chanel_5

[trobadora]

Title: Radical Treatments
Author: wanderingwidget
Characters: mensa!Sheppard, mensa!Rod
Setting: MENSA-verse
Rating: PG-13 for swearing
Warnings: Minor character death(s), rampant cliche abuse, hackneyed psychology, present tense
Summary: in which mensa!Sheppard is agoraphobic, Rod's overprotective, and Sumner's kind of an ass.
Recipient: chanel_5

Comments

[paradise_city]

Oh, John. As someone else mentioned, I was ready for a last minute, save the day ending, but I really like that there wasn't one. I love the way you wrote John here, so brave in his own small ways and then so broken. This made me flaily and just...gah, so good. Excellent writing here.

[mangst]

This was heartbreaking, in a hurts so good kind of way. Thanks for sharing. :)

[chanel_5]

That was great! That was sad :( It's ok though, cause John gets better, cause he and Rodney fly to the rift and all that, so John gets better, John gets better...

Thankyou.

[chanel_5]

Awesome! I'm glad you (seemed :P) to have liked it, and you're v. v. welcome, of course.

[chanel_5]

Of course I enjoyed it, plus, a whole story of my very own, YaY! Just my poor wittle Johnny, I just wanna squishy hug him till he's allll better.

[korilian]

Oh ouch.

[skeddy_kat]

This was very well-written. I hope John finds some comfort in the future. Poor baby!