Heroes Fic: "Whom Gods Destroy"

[mercaque]

Title: Whom Gods Destroy
Pairing/Characters: Mohinder Suresh/Gabriel Gray, also stars RuthlessBastard!Hiro
Summary: Time is Hiro's most brutal weapon against Charlie's killer.
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Through 1x18, "Parasite."
Warnings: Somebody dies. Nobody flies.
Disclaimer: All characters owned by NBC and Tim Kring; no profit is being made or

Comments

[mercaque]

Thanks so much for reading! It's fun to play with timelines.

Though I do like your alternate reality of Gabriel never meeting Chandra. Quite interesting.

Thanks! Although I can't take credit for the concept, which originated with the future challenge. :)

[indyhat]

Man, that's dark. But really excellently told! Very thought-provoking. Very nicely done :)

[mercaque]

Wow, thanks! Yeah, the story ended up being creepier than I intended, but I guess that happens with Mylar...

[mossymermaid]

Oh wow, that was dark on so many levels. What an interesting insight into future!hiro, and into Mo and Gabriel.

I love the way you showed people can become heroes or monsters depending on their lives, that they are made and not born.

This rocks!

[mercaque]

Thank you!

I liked writing Dark Hiro, and (relatively) nice Gabriel. It's interesting how well both of their personalities lend themselves to flipping like that.

[mercaque]

Thank you! :)

[ginger_maya]

Oh, Hiro. You have become what you wanted to destroy. ;_;

Awesome story!

[mercaque]

Gah.... sorry this took me so long, I thought I had replied to this :-/ Anyway, thank you so much for reading!