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mercurial_fan

New fic!

Apr 17, 2012 15:18

Title: I'm gonna set my soul on fire.
Pairings: Anthony/OC's, Ian/Anthony
Ratings/Warnings: Paedophilia, (non-graphic) rape, incest, character death, dark themes, angst. NC-17.
Summary: Anthony burns, and he makes sure that Ian does too.
A/N: This is not a happy fic. I don't normally write stuff like this, so I'm not sure if it's any good. Consider ( Read more... )

slash, non-con, underage, smosh, dark, nc-17

Comments 36

vespiquen8 April 17 2012, 20:20:53 UTC

I really enjoyed this, the whole thing with Ian as water and Anthony as fire. I love all fics from you, but this one I realllyyyy loved. :)

Sorry for the crappy comment, but I'm in a bit of a rush right now. :P I hope you post more soon. :)

mercurial_fan April 17 2012, 20:31:12 UTC

You can comment again? Yay! :D

terryn99 April 17 2012, 21:02:41 UTC

One of the best fics I've ever read I love these kind of fic ( reason I have no clue) but you have to wright more like this your such a good wrighter at smut and stuff like this omg i should stop rambeling on about this so um bye.

mercurial_fan April 18 2012, 09:07:48 UTC

Haha, thanks!

michaelangelo24 April 17 2012, 22:48:33 UTC

Well that is certainly a less sexy version of rape... not that rape should be sexy. xP

Is it weird that as soon as I started reading this, iTunes started playing a song called Soul On Fire? :P

Anyway, I liked the fire/water metaphor and how you turned it into reality at the end. The capitalization was a bit confusing at times, since it felt best suited for just Fire and Water, rather than Hurt and Take too.

Now go write your specialty: non-depressing sexy smut! :D

mercurial_fan April 18 2012, 09:13:49 UTC

I've no idea how to write a sexy version of rape, lol. I think rape is per definition not sexy XD Which leaves me with the obvious thing to do: writing a happy sexy time fic! Woot!

michaelangelo24 April 18 2012, 20:10:09 UTC

Just make them like it in the end. ;)

Yay, smut! :D

9800andseagulls April 17 2012, 23:24:28 UTC

Wow that was intense.
I usually wouldn't like something like this, but the language and the style in which you have written makes it, I don't want to say less obvious, but I found it made the whole taboo subjects less shocking, and made me focus more on the intentions and actions of the characters.
I actually really loved it.
I love anything you write however, Im always pleased when I see something new of your's on the homepage.
This was my second favorite fic of yours, the first obviously being "Dark side of the moon".
Can't wait for more!

mercurial_fan April 18 2012, 09:15:06 UTC

Yay, thanks! I think I like Dark Side of the Moon better too XD So happy that you like it though!

9800andseagulls April 19 2012, 20:51:10 UTC

It was goooooooooooooooooood! I need someone to force me to finish mine, Im SO lazy! how do you find the time/energy?!

mercurial_fan April 19 2012, 21:26:53 UTC

I wrote this in like 20 minutes... XD

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gothic_shoujo April 18 2012, 01:50:23 UTC

Whoaaa.
That's about all I can convey about my reaction to this fic. xD
I loved this, honestly. I love how intense and delicously dark it is, and how the story seems to be told from inside Anthony's psyche; distorted, dark, and unhinged from reality. The ending was amazing too, and it left me feeling a little bit scared of Anthony for a moment. Lol! Thankfully, the real Anthony is awesome, sane and isn't anything like the Anthony in this fic.
Awesome work! :]

mercurial_fan April 18 2012, 09:17:30 UTC

It would be so disturbing and sad if it was real :O I'm glad you liked all the darkness in this fic, since it was filled with it XD