Spaiku of Blue

Dec 10, 2008 12:36

Just doing a little housekeeping and bringing home my Seasonal Spuffy entries from the past spring. I plumb forgot about them!
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13 Spaiku from "Something Blue"
Author: mere_ubuLength: 148 words/221 syllables ( Read more... )

btvs: s4, seasonal spuffy, btvs:s/b, btvs:spike, spaiku

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eowyn_315 December 11 2008, 00:13:40 UTC
Yay! I can't remember if I read these the first time, but they were entertaining either way! Love "The Big-Pile-of-Dusts" and "White wedding? Barely." Ooh, and "cake toppers"! LOL!

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mere_ubu December 11 2008, 04:59:25 UTC
Thank you! I probably had more fun writing these than any other batch. (Also, the mister and I have one of those crazy hyphenated names, so that one was kind of a gimme. *g*) I'm glad you had fun, too!

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slaymesoftly December 11 2008, 01:36:33 UTC
Wonderful, as always!

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mere_ubu December 11 2008, 05:00:14 UTC
Thank you! And it's always wonderful to hear from you. :)

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snickfic December 11 2008, 16:19:37 UTC
Scoobies scandalized
by mind-frying displays of
unremitting schmoop.

Yah. Me, too. My first impression of that episode was, "Spike/Buffy=icky." But now I go back and, you know? Hindsight really doesn't improve the schmoop that much.

Fifteen minutes more
holed up in the Watcher’s loo.
White wedding? Barely.

Bwa ha ha.

Spike lips! Lips of Spike!!
Love transmogrifies into
abomination.

Transmogrifies! I've read a haiku with transmogrifies in it! Woo hoo!

They're all fabulous, though. And the "Goodbye, Honey" section is possibly the most understated and yet right description of the aftereffects that I've seen.

BTW, I recced you yesterday.

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mere_ubu December 11 2008, 18:39:16 UTC
Thank you for your lovely feedback! I was hoping to get at the absurdity of the situation but also a hint that even this corny spell-induced romp had a few little irreversible consequences. And thanks you also for the rec. :D

*scrambles off to check it out*

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mere_ubu December 11 2008, 20:14:09 UTC
Aw, thanks for reading. Glad I could make you laugh! :D

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diachrony December 11 2008, 21:57:45 UTC
Cake toppers and "Wind Beneath My Wings" ... heh heh.

Your spaiku are delicious sexy little nibbles!

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mere_ubu December 17 2008, 05:00:50 UTC
I love the idea of Spike being tormented with sentimental memories of wedding planning.

And wow, that's a delicious compliment. Thank you, sweetie! I'm thrilled that you think so. :D

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