Comments | merith: February writing challenge: day 14

merith

February writing challenge: day 14

Feb 22, 2008 09:54

Comments 18

bleedtoblue February 22 2008, 16:58:54 UTC

And an exciting bit of writing it is! Duo has something in common with Fraser from Due South, rooftop chases!

merith February 22 2008, 18:03:53 UTC

oh! makes me wish i watched due south, then! :) rooftop chases are great! especially when there's someone like doing doing the chasing. ;)

thanks for reading!

asia_2 February 22 2008, 17:22:55 UTC

(@o@) That was a close call! Another usual day at work huh... (^o^;)

merith February 22 2008, 18:04:24 UTC

yep, the same ol' grind for duo! ;)

*snugs* thanks for reading, asia!

samikitty February 22 2008, 17:55:02 UTC

ooo~~~ love it when duo's all hardcore like that~~~ (well i like it when he's all hardcore porny too but that's a whole 'nother story. ^_~) like bleedtoblue said, duo's like a Mountie... he always gets his man. ^O^

merith February 22 2008, 18:05:14 UTC

uh huh! i figured i had to show him in a rooftop chase or something...

...of course he always gets his man! he got heero, right? ;) *snugs*

sharona1x2 February 22 2008, 18:03:42 UTC

That was a great way to use this prompt! I love me some action!Duo. ♥

merith February 22 2008, 18:06:27 UTC

hee! i wish i felt comfortable enough to write action more often, because it can be such fun. :)

i figured the prompt had to be something action-y, and thought chasing his suspect would be a great way to go.

*snugs* thanks for reading sharon!

sunhawk16 February 22 2008, 22:21:59 UTC

You've got a great little 'universe' going here, and I love this peek into it! I'm just going to be over here quietly imagining Heero having a heart attack now. ^____________________^

merith February 22 2008, 23:50:13 UTC

hehe... you don't think he's seen duo perform these same tricks for him? or that he's done worst things in the line of duty? course, heero just might have shot the guy in the leg rather than let him jump off the roof. ;)

i'm kinda liking this universe too... would like to keep it going after the challenge month is over.

*snugs*

sunhawk16 February 23 2008, 00:34:19 UTC

Well yeah, but I can't help liking the idea of Heero scolding Duo for jumping, while Duo grins rather unrepentently. ^_____^
And we'd be delighted to see you continue this universe!

merith February 23 2008, 01:48:42 UTC

oh i can just see them trading scolds and grins! worried, but not so much...a hard balance to maintain, i'm sure!