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meritjubet

[Fic: GW] On Romancing

Feb 11, 2008 23:51

Title: On Romancing
Fandom: GW
Rating: PG
Characters: Mariemaia+OC, Lady Une, Wufei
Notes: sequel to Death and Homework.

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“You’re blushing! You’re blushing! Mariemaia, you’re blushing!” Josh exclaimed, leaning in close as if to study the phenomena. This, of course, only made Mariemaia blush harder.

Mariemaia stopped blushing suddenly and stared at ( Read more... )

fic: gw, fic: all

Comments 12

sharona1x2 February 11 2008, 13:03:21 UTC

That was so funny! I felt very sorry for Wufei. I hope Duo doesn't have his office bugged, because he'd never let Wufei live that down. ^______^

My favorite line was Une's: “This is going to be quicker than you had imagined but much, much more painful.” *giggles*

meritjubet February 11 2008, 13:07:35 UTC

Wow, you were quick!

Duo... may have his ways ^___^ Or Mariemaia might just let it slip and woah! Duo's teasing radar has a new target ;)

It was my favourite as well. They are so doomed.

Thanks!

lil_1337 February 11 2008, 15:41:05 UTC

*DL* The joys of dealing with inquisitive teenagers. There is nothing that goes unscrutinized. I would have felt worse for Wufei and Lady Une if I hadn't been so amused.

meritjubet February 11 2008, 23:57:27 UTC

That was pretty much how I felt. And when teenagers get stuck on ideas... Wufei is so screwed XD

Thanks!

misanagi February 11 2008, 15:43:29 UTC

I really, really like Josh. He and Mariemaia make such a wonderful couple. I really like how you write them.

meritjubet February 11 2008, 23:57:56 UTC

He's fun to write! :) Thank you! ^_^

ramenkuri February 11 2008, 16:55:41 UTC

Mariemaia's interrogation of Wufei was hilarious! And her disbelief of his denials. Classic. I hope Duo finds out about it all :D

meritjubet February 11 2008, 23:58:58 UTC

Hee, thank you! I do too, hopefully Wufei won't then kill Duo. xD

askerian February 12 2008, 03:36:03 UTC

ahahaha. D'awww, that was so cute. I really adore Josh, I do think his kind of goofy behavior would be perfect to get Mariemaia off her pedestal of I AM TEH KING-ness without her even noticing.

... the "when did you start dating my father" scenes just about killed me laughing. XD ahh, socute.

meritjubet February 12 2008, 04:48:03 UTC

He surprises her too much for her to be too certain where the conversation is going :)

Well. It was easy for her to confuse. It made perfect sense to Mariemaia! XD