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meritjubet

[Fic: GW] Clinic Hours

Feb 14, 2008 00:22

Title: Clinic Hours
Fandom: GW
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Mariemaia+OC, Relena, Wufei, Heero
Notes: sequel to Death and Homework and On Romancing.

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“I know things haven’t always been that… well between us,” Mariemaia said, staring at Relena hopefully. “But I want that to change. And! Not just because I want your advice right now. I want it change, ( Read more... )

fic: gw, fic: all

Comments 11

misanagi February 13 2008, 14:37:18 UTC

*dies laughing* I love this series! Josh really has my heart, he's so much fun and so nice, and Mariemaia is great. I love these two! And of course, poor confused Heero, Relena and Wufei being all overprotective...

meritjubet February 14 2008, 03:11:16 UTC

I'm glad you do! :) They really meant the best. But. Yeah.

Thanks!

sharona1x2 February 13 2008, 14:48:43 UTC

*laughs at Heero and Wufei* They really do over-react, don't they? ^_^

This series is so cute. I'm enjoying every bit of it. You've succeeded in doing something that isn't easy. You've created an original character who is likable, but doesn't outshine everyone else. I hope there will be more!

meritjubet February 14 2008, 03:13:29 UTC

They do. But at least Wufei hadn't heard the conversation! ^__~

I've deliberately tried not to use Josh a lot and to have the main focus revolve around the actual GW characters.

I originally thought this would be just a one shot! XD So, we'll see ^__^

askerian February 13 2008, 17:08:01 UTC

Maybe I could be a little taller but I can live. I’ve already thought of investing in man heels,”

Killed. Ded.

This is the best OC ever. XD The whole fic was funny, but his lines at the end just slayed me. I ded. ded i say.

meritjubet February 14 2008, 03:14:56 UTC

Thanks! I thought that may be a little over the top, but Josh is a little over the top! (and would like to be taller)

merith February 13 2008, 18:23:04 UTC

oh man!! this is so hilarous! heero and wufei as over protective older brothers? uncles? goons? they are too precious, and man! i just adore josh! you must continue to write about him, he's just fantastic.

*hugs you tightly* thank you for writing this series! it's so much fun, and i am loving it greatly!

meritjubet February 14 2008, 03:16:10 UTC

He seems to be a hit, which surprises me as most OCs tend to be tolerated.

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

lil_1337 February 14 2008, 02:48:58 UTC

Poor Relena, that has got to be the most awkward conversation ever. I pity Josh *snuggles him*

meritjubet February 14 2008, 03:17:05 UTC

She really wanted the earth to swallow her. *nods*

Thanks! :)