Comments | merlebelacqua: Fanfic: Blackouts

merlebelacqua

Fanfic: Blackouts

Nov 03, 2006 20:34

He needs some time to take in what he’s seeing. A blue police box fading away. The Tardis fading away. The Doctor leaving. The Doctor leaving him behind on a space station.

He waits, hopes, telling himself that the Doctor just went to collect Rose and will come back for him. But the tiny, evil part of his consciousness, telling him that he’s been ( Read more... )

torchwood, fanfiction

Comments 17

indiefairy November 3 2006, 20:03:01 UTC

Very well written, and hey for having english as a foriegn language you write a hell of a lot better than some native english speakers, myself included.

I hope you write more, as I look forward to seeing what other splendid things you come up with. XD

merlebelacqua November 3 2006, 23:42:11 UTC

Thank you! I'll try, but the bunny doesn't often bite me. Though if it does, it keeps hanging there.

cupati November 3 2006, 22:59:44 UTC

Stunning! I think this is the most realistic Jack!Realisation fic I've read.

merlebelacqua November 3 2006, 23:49:06 UTC

If you people keep inflating my ego like that, I may soon lift off. ;)
But seriously, thank you, that's a great compliment!

adafrog November 4 2006, 01:50:30 UTC

That was wonderful. Thanks.

merlebelacqua November 4 2006, 02:21:11 UTC

Thank you!

ladyfiresprite November 4 2006, 02:42:35 UTC

Fantastic! I always love reading these kinds of fics. I caught one of the musical quotes, "No good deed goes unpunished" from 'Wicked'. Wonderful one to pick, btw. I couldn't catch the other's, though. Great job all the same. :-)

merlebelacqua November 4 2006, 02:50:09 UTC

Thank you very much! Yes, I guess the other quotes are a bit more obscure, as Wicked is really quite popular, no pun intended.

mneiai November 4 2006, 06:29:18 UTC

This is awesome! Definitely one of the better fics that show Jack realizing he's immortal, and also showing just the general aftermath.

merlebelacqua November 4 2006, 06:34:39 UTC

Yes, I always wondered how he'd cope in this post-Dalek attack earth. And thanks for the Awesome, it means very much. *hugs*

mneiai November 4 2006, 06:52:24 UTC

I know. The topic fascinates me, I can't wait until they give us more information on it. I'm half hoping it's like what most fanon is, and half hoping they come up with something completely different that none of us would have ever thought up ^.^

And the "awesome" was totally deserved.