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Fiction by Tessa: "Inheritance"

Nov 01, 2010 12:32

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anonymous November 2 2010, 01:19:43 UTC

i kind of wish i had a ghost right now, even though it is a little creepy. It is kinda nice :)

beautifully written

-polkadotiful;)

tessagratton November 3 2010, 13:18:28 UTC

At least he'll always want her... though in a very creepy way. I suspect, as I said to others above, that this isn't going to end well.

Thank you.

valeriekwrites November 2 2010, 14:04:28 UTC

Ooh, I loved this! So creepy and awful and awesome. I was actually rooting for anyone BUT Leyla. I love the way you subverted all the tropes. Quinn loses, Leyla doesn't want another boy, and poor Max! Loved his voice!

tessagratton November 3 2010, 13:19:19 UTC

Hahaha, no love for Leyla? Hahaha. And dude, "subversion" is my middle name!

... ok not really. It's Lynn.

valeriekwrites November 3 2010, 13:26:39 UTC

Ha! Subversion would be an awesome middle name.

And no, no love for Leyla, but not because you didn't make her sympathetic, just because I'm really mean.

tessagratton November 3 2010, 13:29:22 UTC

LOL! <3 <3 <3

secretdoorways November 2 2010, 14:28:42 UTC

Possession! Hot ghost! Silly high school boys who think they're invincible! Is there ANYTHING wrong with this story?

I was/am still a Max girl, though :(

tessagratton November 3 2010, 13:20:13 UTC

Mmm I was totally distracted by Ariel and Eric. Hahah.

Thank you! I was a Max fan from the moment I named him that, bc it's one of my favorite names! /shallow.

Glad you enjoyed the story! I had fun writing it, which is always nice.

secretdoorways November 3 2010, 15:38:19 UTC

why do you think I picked the picture in the first place? ;D

YES. I had a problem figuring out what exactly was going on at the end then it HIT me. :D

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tessagratton November 3 2010, 13:20:42 UTC

Woo! Sparse dialogue FTW! I think Max makes up for it by being so conversational.

Also, HAHA. :p

hellife_gal November 3 2010, 10:16:33 UTC

Goddess, that was creepy. And, uh, there was almost no dialogue, and I really love that... And, well, I really was sort of mental cheering for Max, and the ghost was just... Um, too dead. It was actually pretty freaky...
I like ghosts in general, but not this one...
Which just tells me this story was so damned good.

tessagratton November 3 2010, 13:21:46 UTC

Yeah, the ghost was totally, totally a bad guy. I mean, still sexy, if you like that kind of thing. But Max, despite his shortcomings, was the one I was cheering for, too. Which is probably why it ended the way it did...

Thanks! :D :D :D