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The Pain Study

Nov 15, 2010 15:36

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brenna yovanoff, fiction by brenna

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claire8sterling November 15 2010, 22:47:51 UTC

This is amazing. It's subtle, but once you get to the end it all comes together.

brennayovanoff November 17 2010, 18:41:34 UTC

Thanks! I was in one of those weird, quiet moods, so nothing caught on fire :)

animewave November 16 2010, 01:30:36 UTC

I really like the quiet mood that you created :) and I agree about the subtlety.

brennayovanoff November 17 2010, 18:59:14 UTC

Glad you liked it! Sometimes, it's just an atmospheric day . . .

apocalypticbob November 16 2010, 04:08:18 UTC

This one hurt.

Don't take that as admonishment. Take it as a compliment.

Still... ow.

brennayovanoff November 17 2010, 18:43:25 UTC

I think that's one of the reasons I just couldn't go longer-it's in pieces, over time, but it still felt almost like one single freaky snapshot when I was writing it.

kristin_briana November 16 2010, 04:39:47 UTC

I am a terrible English major and must admit that I did not fully understand this, but I do love it.

brennayovanoff November 17 2010, 18:44:17 UTC

Do not question your English-Majorness! (I was in a very arcane mood when I wrote it.)

patesden November 16 2010, 13:16:19 UTC

Loved it.

It reminded me of Eve Alexandra's The Drowned Girl poems--which are favorites of mine.

brennayovanoff November 17 2010, 18:45:52 UTC

Oh, wow-thank you! Those are totally beautiful and totally unsettling.