Just some grammar stuff: change the semicolon into a comma in the sentence "While turning..." and split the sentence "Rumors were..." into two after the word estate.
It's really great and very interesting! What class is the character? Will you be writing about the whole campaign or is this a separate story? Awaiting more! :)
He starts out as a fighter (fitting for just a town guard). He very soon goes on the path of a paladin. He wasn't raised a paladin though, and he does not have a chosen diety he worships (rules state a paladin doesn't require one). So, he's not really a stereotypical knight in shining armor.
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Just some grammar stuff: change the semicolon into a comma in the sentence "While turning..." and split the sentence "Rumors were..." into two after the word estate.
It's really great and very interesting! What class is the character? Will you be writing about the whole campaign or is this a separate story? Awaiting more! :)
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