the one you're trying to save [fic] [hp]

[mewling]

> the one you’re trying to save
> mewling

> { harry potter, M15+, grindeldore, slash}
> { In reality, there were four people Albus wanted to save. }
> { My un-smutty springsmut fic. I should post my other contest fics to this account too. }

Comments

[nemesister]

That was great! I was only planning to check it out and read it when I have more time, but I couldn't stop. You rocked the second person and wrote a really convincing creepy Gellert.

[mewling]

Thank-you!

[mewling]

Thank-you (^_^)

[mewling]

:D Glad you liked it.

[accio_yossarian]

The style of this, comprised of all those small sections, was just brilliant and captured the essence of this story perfectly. Well done. You caught Dumbledore's emotions very well.

[mewling]

Thank-you so much!

[oudeteron]

This is really powerful, I love each single line of this fic. Your characterization is spot-on. Great use of the second person, too!

[mewling]

(*^_^*) Thank-you!