Rain

Dec 20, 2010 16:14


Title: Rain

Author: mexicananallama

Pairing: Yoochun & Jaejoong

Rating: PG-13

Genre: Angst

Summary: Yoochun would wish the rain away just to see Jaejoong smile.

A/N: Dedicated to be_ddelusionall for her Birthday. Sorry it was a bit late hun, and I hope you like it.
Just to see your smile, I’ll wish the rain away )

fanfic, pairing: jaechun, genre: angst, length: oneshot

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mexicananallama December 20 2010, 21:16:25 UTC
Spot for be_ddelusionall Hope you like!!!!

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be_ddelusionall December 21 2010, 03:05:26 UTC
*sniffles* Wow

anytime you ever say you can't write or your writing is bad I'm going to take this fic and throw it at your head. Because this fic is amazing.
AMAZING! too short, wants more angsty JaeChun

*huggles it*

damn. I read this on the bus and almost started crying.

Rain is my most favoritest thing in the world, because rain cleans everything, makes the world green, gives new life to new things. *snuggles Jaejoong*

I love love love this, so much. Thank you! ♥♥♥

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mexicananallama December 21 2010, 16:40:47 UTC
Haha, amazing? Wow. Thank you hun, I'm really glad you liked it.

And I knew I had to make it JaeChun cuz I know how much you love it and there really isn't that many Angsty JaeChun fics.

Rain...Rain is special to me. I feel about rain the way Jae does (at least in this fic). When it rains, I always wish it would clean away my wrongdoings, but at the same time, I know it can't. But still, it washes away the day, and leaves it fresh and clean for a new day.

You are most welcome, I'm honored and glad u liked it. Love you very much dear and I hope you had a great Birthday.

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mysticseas December 21 2010, 01:39:36 UTC
As I read this, the rain is pouring down outside, echoing the heartache and sadness.
This is very well written...my heart feels so heavy for Yoochun here.

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mexicananallama December 21 2010, 16:42:00 UTC
Seriously? It was raining while you read this, wow. It was actually raining when I began to write this. Haha.

I'm glad I was able to show Yoochun's heartache.

Thanks for reading~

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mexicananallama December 21 2010, 16:42:13 UTC
glad u enjoyed it ^_^

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sab08 December 21 2010, 06:23:23 UTC
this is so good
it made me cry.. TT

i'm lost for words..
all i can say now is i love this~

i can feel the sadness of the characters in the end, especially chun.. and i like the pictures in between.. <3

thank you~

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mexicananallama December 21 2010, 16:43:30 UTC
i'm sorry it made you cry

speechless? thank you and i'm glad u loved it.

the pictures were fun to put in and i'm glad i was able to convey such sadness

thanks for reading~

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sab08 December 22 2010, 04:04:30 UTC
its okay.. its seldom to find something that can make me cry.. :)

yes, yes, i was, and i think i'm still speechless..

and *runs and peeks at the windows of the bookstore* i can't see jaemin in the bookstore.. did they break up? or is it because jae's still in the apartment and min's at home??

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mexicananallama December 22 2010, 18:23:31 UTC
well then i'm glad i was able to make you speechless, thanks!

lol, jaejoong is probably at changmin's place being comforted

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xsuju_addictx December 21 2010, 08:47:34 UTC
SJADGHASKJLHAS
WHATTTTT!?!?!?!? ITS TOOOO ANGSTY!!
BELIEVE ME, I CRIED!!! ....YOU'RE NOT BELIEVEING ARE YOU??
FINE FINE, DO WAHTEVER YOU WANT BUT I SWEAR, I GOT TEARS.
ADFSJAGJDS WHY THE HEEELLL?!?!?!?!?!?

QUOTE: When I’m with you, I know what to expect from you, what we’re going to do each day. With him, it’s unpredictable.
THIS SEEMS SOOO TRUE, AHH, WHY DID YOU HAVE TO BREAK JAECHUN??
SIGGGHHHHH.

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mexicananallama December 21 2010, 16:45:26 UTC
Woman, what is with you? Haha.
All caps, wow.
And I'm sorry u cried (or should I be happy?) but the heavy angst was a must ^_^
Sorry I had to break JaeChun but love isn't all sunshine and rainbows you know.
How about I try to write you a happy Jaechun, huh? Would that make up for your tears?

Thanks for reading ^_^

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xsuju_addictx December 21 2010, 17:42:03 UTC
ACTUALLY, HOW ABOUT YOU WRITE MORE SAD JAECHUN CAUSE YOU HAVE THE POWER TO MAKE ANGSTY JAECHUN. LOL. AHH, I DONT CARE JUST DO YOUR BEST IN GETTING ME COMMENTING YOUR JAECHUN FICS~

*wriggles eyebrows*

WHAT WHATTT?!!??! I LOVE CAPSLOCK, SO NO COMPLAINING, WOMAN!
HMMPPHH.
*sulks*

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mexicananallama December 21 2010, 17:44:55 UTC
haha. more angsty jaechun? i don't know, i'll have to think about that.

AND I'M NOT COMPLAINING!!! IT'S FUN! LOL

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