LJIdol - Week 24 Entry

Oct 09, 2014 15:57

The Cupertino Effect

Paul and David sat facing each other in the small sushi restaurant, a bowl of warm, salted edamame between them.

Paul asked, “So how was your day, dear?”

David began describing his day, and all was quite pleasant until Paul interrupted, “Did you just say, ‘Kill all the monkeys’?”

David chortled, “What? No. I was talking ( Read more... )

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jem0000000 October 11 2014, 02:32:46 UTC
Oh no! I'm with Halfshellvenus, I really hope he's dreaming.

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mezzominty October 11 2014, 10:26:58 UTC
Lol, me too, but who knows? ;) Thanks for reading!

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jem0000000 October 11 2014, 22:49:39 UTC
You're welcome. :)

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eternal_ot October 11 2014, 11:17:50 UTC
OMG...where is this heading?..Good progression..Spooked me for sure.

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mezzominty October 13 2014, 09:49:11 UTC
Thanks!

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adoptedwriter October 11 2014, 16:12:58 UTC
Enjoyable story! AW

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mezzominty October 13 2014, 09:49:30 UTC
thanks!

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dmousey October 12 2014, 02:24:25 UTC
Sushi... yum. Dreams are weird, and this one is slightly menacing to boot. Thanks for penning! :)

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mezzominty October 13 2014, 09:49:53 UTC
Thank you for reading!

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eska818 October 12 2014, 03:05:02 UTC
Well, that was creepy! Haha.

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mezzominty October 13 2014, 09:50:30 UTC
I was aiming for creepy! Thanks!

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