LJIdol - Week 24 Entry

Oct 09, 2014 15:57

The Cupertino Effect

Paul and David sat facing each other in the small sushi restaurant, a bowl of warm, salted edamame between them.

Paul asked, “So how was your day, dear?”

David began describing his day, and all was quite pleasant until Paul interrupted, “Did you just say, ‘Kill all the monkeys’?”

David chortled, “What? No. I was talking ( Read more... )

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alycewilson October 13 2014, 00:12:26 UTC
Creepy! This reminded me of a more sinister "Being John Malkovich."

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mezzominty October 13 2014, 09:50:54 UTC
Love that movie! Thanks for reading!

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karmasoup October 13 2014, 07:01:51 UTC
I was expecting this to go someplace lighthearted and silly. Did not see this ending coming. Good thing getting one over on me. And wow, creepilicious! (What in blue the hell was in that edamame?!)

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mezzominty October 13 2014, 09:51:51 UTC
No kidding, right? And I love edamame! thanks!

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mamas_minion October 13 2014, 07:04:01 UTC
Wow, this is a great story and I did not see the ending coming at all.

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mezzominty October 13 2014, 09:52:07 UTC
Thank you!

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rayaso October 13 2014, 21:04:07 UTC
The end was very surprising! Very well done. I suppose edamame has that effect on some people, although a homicidal spree does seem a little extreme.

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mezzominty October 14 2014, 17:42:44 UTC
It's an extreme legume :) Thanks for reading!

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muchtooarrogant October 14 2014, 00:14:03 UTC
This is exactly why I never eat sushi. *grin*

Dan

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mezzominty October 14 2014, 17:43:14 UTC
Better safe than sorry/delusional/homicidal!

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