LJIdol Entry - Week 29 Entry

Nov 24, 2014 14:42

Running the Weekend Gauntlet(A Leon Trout story ( Read more... )

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tsuki_no_bara November 24 2014, 22:12:09 UTC
was i supposed to laugh? because i did. that poor girl!

last month a guy who was visiting one of my upstairs neighbors banged on my door because he was choking on what i later discovered was a fish oil pill - he was supposed to take two and choked on the first one, so he had this GIANT horse pill in his hand - and because he couldn't talk, he couldn't call 911. so i called them for him. and then he managed to swallow the thing after all. and an ambulance came anyway. exciting but not nearly as exciting as if he'd swallowed a fork!

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fodschwazzle November 25 2014, 01:33:10 UTC
I like how quickly she transitioned into "Fork Girl." I also admire her ability to retell a story about how she got a fork in her throat while said fork is in her throat. I could read more stories from the perspective of this narrator, who goes on to thinking about closing in the next twenty minutes in the same sentence as a possible life-changing crisis is resolving. It's a good kind of callous disregard for circumstances.

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i_17bingo November 25 2014, 15:46:29 UTC
our public computers that are so old that they still have 3.5 inch floppy disk drives.

Hey! I still remember pretty vividly when that shit was state-of-the-freakin'-art! Don't make me feel old!

“I swallowed it.”

Wait. What?

The dialogue, in particular, literally cracked me up. This piece was funny, weird, a little scary, and utterly perfect.

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theun4givables November 25 2014, 19:25:07 UTC
Ah, the good ol' incident report.

I would have forgotten to ask for the girl's name, too.

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suesniffsglue November 26 2014, 01:54:03 UTC
My goodness. Nicely told, and fun to picture. Poor girl.

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