Lisa!

[miatauro]

Okay, so I have Lisa's second journal entry, please find it here. I really do have an explanation for having people communicate with her via comments, should anybody actually do it. Sarkat pointed out that, if I don't want people breaking the fourth wall, I should give them somewhere where they can, so I'll be making parallel posts to my LJ, if I

Comments

[sarkat]

1) As I said on AIM, I am terribly amused my Linli's unspaced dialogue

[miatauro]

2) I dunno. I tossed that in there because it seemed interesting to me that Lisa would be able to still feel him even in the deepest coma, and because it's cool and ominous while still being ambiguous enough that there are a lot of directions I could go with it later without having to think too much about it now. We could/should discuss!

3) A what, now?

4) Yup, a system of caverns. I'm not sure where, geographically. Unfortunately, since Lisa is so interested in maps, she's obligating me to generate some. You wouldn't happen to know of software that lets you take an existing map and do an arbitrary geological transform on it, would you?
We can still use that! Sooner or later, they're going to return to the White Tower (I've already written the scene where Elizabeth asks Lisa to leave. It was interesting writing a scene where Lisa doesn't have the upper hand in dialogue.) and I'm sure the yellow ajah will be mighty interested in what's going on, particularly if Kye's got evil-poisoning.

5) Yes.

6) Good point!

[sarkat]

2) We should discuss. IM me sometime when you aren't trying to work. Or at least have time to chat.

3) Are near-death conversation with a god (or Death, in Vanyel's case) involving a choice between death and peace or life and more work. Per... Magic's Pawn, I think. But I really can't keep the books in that triolgy separate.
The end of the last Lisa scene seemed to call for on Kye's Part.
Though, there are a number of other possible "What's going on in Coma!Kye's head" scenes that might or might not be mutually exclusive with that.

4) Matt and Aidan would be the ones to talk to about maps.

[antilles1382]

In reference to question #6, I am sending an email to Shannon to start discussing that. Among other things Ahrain/Raynard related.

Oh, what a tangled web we all wove with this game.

[goldschakal]

Since this is the first thing from this longer story line of yours that I've ever read it was still well done enough for me to at least understand the character's situation. So well done!

Also, I've got my regular Rifts world RPG game tonight, this totally sounds like a journal one could find from a survivor and written some decades after "The Cataclysm", so put me in a great mood.