Thank you
bodiddley for drawing my attention to this New York-based school teacher-cum-performance poet. See
http://www.livepoets.com/Poet.aspx?id=45.
As linked by
bodiddley, this is the poem:
Totally like whatever, you know?In case you hadn't noticed
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I really like this poem, specially the bit on:
it is not enough these days to simply QUESTION AUTHORITY.
You have to speak with it, too.
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but yeah, i've not heard of him before. but googled him and found out more. :) i just loved this poem. simple, funny and has a clear message.
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Like, you know?
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so a statement like:
"I'm going to a party tonight with Ed and Jo."
becomes
"I'm going to a party tonight with Ed and Jo???"
i only became aware of this when someone pointed it out to me???
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I just added the "you-know", because the other sentence was a bit long to add a question mark at the end, and have it make sense?
It doesn't seem to work so well with long sentences?
Of course, it sounds silly all the time?
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in the book " the element of style," and sabi walain na raw yung "i think" (and the like) because it weakens the sentence:
weak: I think you are pretty.
strong: You are pretty.
Di ba?
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