Comments | michellek: You Need a Bit of Back and Forth (30 Rock, Jack/Liz)

michellek

You Need a Bit of Back and Forth (30 Rock, Jack/Liz)

Nov 27, 2010 23:52

Title: You Need a Bit of Back and Forth
Fandom: 30 Rock
Pairing: Jack/Liz
Spoilers: Nothing beyond season one, really
Word Count: 3,484
Rating: NC-17
Notes: Another thing I had on my hard drive for a while and have now finished up and posted. It's completely plotless.
Summary: Liz changes her mind about certain practices.

Disclaimer: Not mine. Don ( Read more... )

jack/liz, 30 rock

Comments 32

ubiquitousmixie November 28 2010, 05:27:15 UTC

WOAH.

Um.

This was fucking awesome. And hot. I don't even...yeah. I really liked it. A lot.

michellek November 29 2010, 05:35:00 UTC

Thank you! :D I'm glad you dug it.

samuraichikx November 28 2010, 05:37:45 UTC

.......-faints-

GOD I love how you write these two! It was hot, but I was also cracking up. Like...it's Jack and Liz hotness, but the hilariousness of Liz being totally awkward with this subject. Love it!

michellek November 29 2010, 05:35:23 UTC

Thank you muchly. :D

bowserbabe November 28 2010, 05:49:49 UTC

This:

She's reminded of Han Solo. Is that weird? Especially since it makes her saying, 'You're good at oral sex' the equivalent of 'I love you.'

and this:

"I want my mouth on--" Your cock. You can think cock, so say it. "--this thing in my hand."

I was pretty miserable before I started reading. But now I'm pretty happy again. I'm so easy when it comes to Jack/Liz amusing porn.

michellek November 29 2010, 05:38:13 UTC

And when it comes to Jack/Liz angsty porn! Which I'm glad for. Since it's good to know that I can please someone in a reasonably consistent manner.

foreverislong November 28 2010, 09:32:34 UTC

I can't decide what I liked more: The in-depth Star Wars reference or the fact that you used the word 'synonym' in the middle of a sexy scene.

But I'm probably gonna go with the linguistics terminology, you know, being a Linguistics geek and all...

So, to sum up: I liked it. A lot, and I probably would have done even if you hadn't used synonymy. So, yay you!! :)

Also, I remembered to log in before commenting, which I think is an achievement in itself.

michellek November 29 2010, 05:41:12 UTC

Thank you! :D I think I might prefer the Star Wars thing myself (mostly because I didn't really like Jack's response to Liz's line initially, and when I zeroed in a way to bring up Star Wars, I was super proud of myself).

danitta November 28 2010, 12:50:10 UTC

it was a truthful story about how to overcome the sexual complexes:) Cool:) and really hot

michellek November 29 2010, 05:41:26 UTC

Thank you!