You Need a Bit of Back and Forth (30 Rock, Jack/Liz)

Nov 27, 2010 23:52

Title: You Need a Bit of Back and Forth
Fandom: 30 Rock
Pairing: Jack/Liz
Spoilers: Nothing beyond season one, really
Word Count: 3,484
Rating: NC-17
Notes: Another thing I had on my hard drive for a while and have now finished up and posted. It's completely plotless.
Summary: Liz changes her mind about certain practices.

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lavenderseaslug November 28 2010, 21:43:46 UTC
It is always one of my favorite things when you post something that is not season-specific.

I don't know if I've ever commented on this before, but your use of parentheticals is one of my favorite things of all time. (I realize I've used "favorite things" twice now, but whatever. Relevant.) I think you just use them so effectively and so humorously, and it's one of the things that makes your writing so in keeping with the tone of the show, I think.

This was just so, you know, completely hot and I love when Jack is the person to teach Liz that sex is okay and then that last little moment was just so sweet and touching and of course he reminds her of Han Solo. Anyway, this is a great thing and a wonderful Sunday treat.

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michellek November 29 2010, 05:53:55 UTC
Thank you so much. :) I've very glad I could roll two of your favorite things into one post. I think I'll never get sick of Jack teaching Liz that sex is okay... partly because someone should do it and, well, why not have that man be her best friend?

(No one sweep in and tell me why it shouldn't be Jack, by the way.)

I'm very glad you liked this.

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fickery November 28 2010, 22:03:54 UTC
This was awesome. Sexy, awkward, realistic and hilarious, and so in-character for both of them. I seriously LOL'd at this line:

"I want my mouth on--" Your cock. You can think cock, so say it. "--this thing in my hand."

Brilliant job!

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michellek November 29 2010, 05:54:19 UTC
Thank you so much! :D

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143k November 29 2010, 00:40:54 UTC
Oh my goodness... so this was insanely HI-LARIOUS and extremely hot and I have no idea how you do it! (Write so well, I mean. Not the... sex stuff, LOL)

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michellek November 29 2010, 05:55:00 UTC
ha, thank you! I'm glad you thought this well-written. :)

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tinafeynatic November 29 2010, 02:43:53 UTC
Yeah.

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michellek November 29 2010, 05:55:17 UTC
Yep. ;)

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mindymakru November 29 2010, 03:35:04 UTC
I'm taking this'n home. I'm sure I'll like... :)

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michellek November 29 2010, 05:55:55 UTC
I hope your certainty turns out to be certainty! :)

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mindymakru November 30 2010, 05:34:47 UTC
It is a certainty. There should be more fics dedicated to them exploring this subject. Yes, that was a hint. ;)

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michellek December 2 2010, 04:52:17 UTC
Your hint has been noticed. :) I must say, I like fics about them exploring this topic myself; I think there's something sexy and meaningful in her feeling more comfortable with this type of sex.

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