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michigangirl30

The first of my flist writing challenges

Jan 19, 2006 18:44

First up, elmyraemilie's request:

Nick/Greg
Situation of my choice
Greg in eyeliner
PLUS: a little inspiration from an old Prince song

Not sure if this is meets expectations... was trying to keep it around 1000 words and it went in a different direction than even I expected. But yah, that's become the usual for me.

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elmyraemilie January 20 2006, 00:47:33 UTC

Eeeee! Nick stalks Greg! Greg gets all hot and aggressive with Nick! Nick gives in and Greg gets (awwww!) shy! It's so cool!

::hugs her fic::

::hugs you::

michigangirl30 January 20 2006, 01:13:34 UTC

Hee, just how do you really feel about it?

I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'm still not really sure how I feel about it myself.

*hugs you back*

fred_bear January 20 2006, 03:49:06 UTC

Just lovely. Greg being so lovingly teasing and Nick being all anxious and terrified about taking the next step. And, mmmmmm, eyeliner.

Great work as always. :)

michigangirl30 January 20 2006, 04:00:22 UTC

Thanks, hon. I can't seem to get off the 'first time' kick. Perhaps for the next one I should make them.. actually have sex. Hm.

What a novel idea. Heh.

downloadable08 January 20 2006, 08:35:49 UTC

Yes, please. I will make you cookies. And if the sex is half as hot as the lead-up was, my brain will up and die on me. Which is not necessarily a bad thing...

michigangirl30 January 20 2006, 14:28:08 UTC

Hee. Thanks. I'm not gonna make any promises but I won't rule it out either. I've got a bunch more challenges to write at the moment, and at least one of them asked specifically for smut.. soo.. it's gonna happen eventually. ;)

schizojuc January 20 2006, 04:00:54 UTC

Greg is so the seducer even though it was Nick who was following him! Greg in eyeliner is HOT!! Loved this!

michigangirl30 January 20 2006, 04:06:15 UTC

Thanks! Who wouldn't be seduced by Greg in eyeliner? Nick's stronger than me, I'd have fainted at his feet. *swoon*

dastardly_soul January 20 2006, 04:07:26 UTC

Nick is so cute when he gets put in unfamiliar territory, he gets all confused and befuddled. Do you think we can get him a pair of jeans like gregs? =)

The CSI tonight was good. "It's always the utility man." My mom was in the room when it ended and I was like "ohhh Nicky" she gave me the oddest look.

michigangirl30 January 20 2006, 14:40:55 UTC

Now that's a winning idea! ;) Glad you liked it!

I agree, that CSI ep was awesome. When Greg said that line, I immediately thought of Nigel Crane, too. I was forever saying, "oooh, Nicky" as well, especially with all those scenes involving his case and Kelly Gordon. Damn, he's gonna need some serious love after all that went down. Poor baby.

anmani January 20 2006, 06:10:42 UTC

Oh you brought David Bowie into it all. Thank you for that. I've always adored that man.
Nick chaing Greg and Greg finally catching him. Beautiful and sweet. It is so nice to read some of your stuff again.
Thank you so very much for something good to read while eating breakfast and hoping that the roads have been cleared of all the snow that fell last night.
/A

michigangirl30 January 20 2006, 14:25:59 UTC

Well, I figured that even Nick would know that David Bowie wore makeup, hee. And as I got started and got to thinking.. I realized that PRince does too! Well, that helped jump start the whole thing.

I'm so happy you enjoyed it! It was sort of grinding to write at first and I was frustrating myself, but it's so rewarding to have actually finished at least one before my self-imposed deadline.

And I have a question for you, Detective Vartan.. do you know his first name? I didn't see it anywhere I looked recently. It would be helpful to know it.. I can't imagine Nick or Greg calling him Vartan all the time.

Thanks, Anne!

anmani January 20 2006, 15:08:56 UTC

I don't know his first name.
I have searched and searched lately, because I have a bunny that won't stop pestering me about him and Grissom.

If CBS has done the usual it should be Alex.
Just like Hodges and Archie has kept their first names.
But maybe it's so dorky that he utterly refuses to use it. Alex Carter has a monster of a Greek family name for real.

But all places that I have looked has him as Det. Vartann.

Men in makeup is quite luring.
/A

michigangirl30 January 20 2006, 16:09:05 UTC

Huh. I guess we'll just have to call him Alex then. And with my luck, I'll probably get it written and then the next ep will reveal that his name is George or Herbert. Heh.